Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Sunshine Pool

This is a pool in the middle of the forest. It is completely filled with light. Another place to hunt or enjoy yourself.

-Dewstar

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  1. Tigerfang stepped towards the water's edge, peering at his reflection. He laid down, and tried to relax.


    -Tigerfang

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  2. Fernpaw is gazing at the light of the Sunshine Pool, waiting for Bramblepaw.

    ~Fernpaw

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  3. Bramblepaw padded up to Fernpaw, nudging her cheek with his nose. "Hi."


    -Bramblepaw

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  4. "Hello, Bramblepaw," Fernpaw said with a purr in her voice, "You are a very sweet cat," Fernpaw stares at the pool and suddenly, her paw darts into the water and comes back out with a golden-colored fish. The fish flops around until Fernpaw swipes it with her claws and then it is dead. "This is for you," she purrs and nudges the fish tord Bramblepaw.

    ~Fernpaw

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  5. Bramblepaw felt the tips of his ears go red. "Why don't we share it?" He nudged Fernpaw closer to the prey.


    -Bramblepaw

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  6. "Alright, I haven't eaten much today, anyway," Fernpaw meows and begins to eat the fish. As they eat the fish together, Fernpaw playfully taps Bramblepaw's back with her tail.

    ~Fernpaw

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  7. Bramblepaw taps Fernpaw back and soon after that, they abandoned the half-eaten fish and played in the water, splashing each other.


    -Bramblepaw

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  8. Fernpaw giggles, and she holds her breath to go underwater. Fernpaw is underwater, her eyes are open and it's easy to see in the clean, lit-up water. She can see that Bramblepaw has gone underwater, too and he opens his eyes. He gazes at her smiling, and forgeting that they are underwater, he opens his mouth to say something and starts to choke and drown. Fernpaw goes back above the surface and grabs Bramblepaw by the scruff and pulls him out of the water. Now, they lay next to each other, in a comfy clover patch by the Sunshine Pool, licking each other dry.

    ~Fernpaw

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  9. "This was fun!" he laughed. "Do you want to meet me here again, tomorrow?" he meowed.

    -Bramblepaw

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  10. Fernpaw nods excitedly and meows, "Of course I do! Why wouldn't I? I meen..I-I love you...Bramblepaw," Fernpaw rubs her cheek agenst Bramblepaw's and purrs. "Goodbye, Bramblepaw," she mews sweetly and then starts to head back to camp.

    ~Fernpaw

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  11. Bramblepaw blushed. He remained where he was, staring at his reflection and thinking about what just happened. He smiled.

    -Bramblepaw

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  12. On her way back to camp, Fernpaw though about what happened at the Sunshine Pool. What if it was Otterwhisker who was there at the Sunshine Pool with her? She shook her head and smiled saying to herself, "No,no, it wouldn't be near as much fun with Otterwhisker," She padded back to camp, happy to be so close to Bramblepaw.

    ~Fernpaw

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  14. After an hour of sitting at the water's edge, Bramblepaw got up and headed back to camp. On the way, he thought about his experience with Fernpaw. What if he mated with her, while they were still apprentices? "No, I can't break the warrior code." he shook his head. He padded back to camp, heading for the apprentices' den.


    -Bramblepaw

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  15. honeyfern found a good spot and began diging she dug till her claws hurt then she put her daughter's body and filled the hole in.she cried then washed her front paws before heading back to camp and the kits she has left.

    ~honeyfern

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  16. Fernstream padded into the Sunshine Pool clearing and smiled. >This place brings back memories, this is where we had our first date! (lol, date??)< she thought. She looked into the pool, it was still filled with light as always, but right now it was more moonlight than sunlight. She could even see the moon's reflection on the surface. "How beautiful," she meowed, and licked Brambleheart's ear.

    ~>Fernstream

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  17. "Remember the first time we came here?" Brambleheart meowed, remembering their first (date). He suddenly leaped into the water, splashing Fernstream with droplets.


    ~Brambleheart

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  18. "Of course I do! How could I forget our first date (lol)?" she meowed and lept into the water, splashing Brambleheart. She flicked her tail, splashing Brambleheart again. Fernstream giggled.

    ~>Fernstream

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  19. Brambleheart smiled. He pulled Fernstream into the water with him.


    ~Brambleheart

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  20. Fernstream lept out of the water and shook her pelt, making droplets fly everywhere, even at Brambleheart. "Enough splashing! Chase me!!" she meowed with a purr and ran around in the clearing, around the Sunshine Pool.

    ~>Fernstream

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  21. Brambleheart started chasing her around until he crashed into her. They laid on the ground, looking into each other's eyes.


    ~Brambleheart

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  22. Together they layed there, glancing up at the stars of Silverpelt. Fernstream pressed her muzzle to Brambleheart's cheek and purred. She opened her mouth (AND ATE HIS HEAD OMNOMNOM LOL JK) to speak, but she was speachless. She just snuggled closer and purred more.

    ~>Fernstream

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  23. (LOL) Brambleheart meowed, "I love you..so very much." he gazed up at Silverpelt.


    ~Brambleheart

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  24. Fernstream closed her eyes. "I love you two," she whispered, "I wish we could stay here forever, but if we do, we'll be in trouble in the morning," She smiled. "But do you think it would be worth it? Maybe we could try to get back to camp before everyone wakes up....I dunno," She licked his ear and sighed.

    ~>Fernstream

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  25. "We better get back to camp." Brambleheart flicked linked his tail into Fernstream's. They got up and started padding back to camp.


    ~Brambleheart

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  26. "Okay," she meowed. She licked Brambleheart's muzzle. She nuzzled him and purred. Once in camp, they crept back to the warriors' den.

    ~>Fernstream

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  27. Tigerfang and Icefrost padded out of the foliage leading into the Sunshine Pool.

    "So........here we are......" Tigerfang meowed, thinking that this was (date) was really awkward...


    ~Tigerfang

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  28. remove the "was" from the second part...

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  29. "Yeah. So....what were you going to tell me?" Icefrost sat down, thinking this wasn't anything important. "I need to get to the training hollow and teach Birchpaw some battle techniques."

    -Icefrost

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  30. "Um.................I-I love you...." Tigerfang's voice wavered.


    ~Tigerfang

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  31. Icefrost's eyes widened for a moment but then smiled. "I love you too, Tigerfang." She scooted closer too him and rested her head on his shoulder.

    -Icefrost

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  32. Tigerfang linked his tail into hers. He felt much more comfortable after telling her about his feelings. He licked her muzzle.


    ~Tigerfang

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  33. Icefrost felt better knowing Tigerfang didn't love anyone else. "I'm so lucky to have you, no one could ever be this lucky." Icefrost gazed up at the sky, watching the clouds move slowly across the peaceful sky.

    (that doesn't sound correct....)

    -Icefrost

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  34. (weird...)

    Tigerfang looked down at the glowing reflection of them. "I never want this day to end..."he thought.


    ~Tigerfang

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  35. Icefrost smiled, then jumped into the water for a swim, splashing Tigerfang on the way in.

    -Icefrost

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  36. Tigerfang laughed and leaped into the cool, refreshing water. He splashed Icefrost when coming up for air.


    ~Tigerfang

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  37. Icefrost came up for air, and swam deeper and deeper, making it look like she's drowning.


    -Icefrost

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  38. Tigerfang thought that she was drowning, and swam quickly towards her. He grabbed her scruff, and hauled her towards land.

    (hm..."land" sounds weird...)


    ~Tigerfang

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  39. Once Tigerfang and her reached land, she cuffed his ear playfully saying, "I can't believe you fell for that." Icefrost saw that Tigerfang had relaxed and said, "We should be heading back. I bet Birchpaw's already waiting for me. See you back at camp Tigerfang!" The couple parted their ways, both thinking about each other.

    -Icefrost

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  40. hmm lets stop here, we can go to great stone later
    -featherkit

    im gonna go in the water
    -dashkit

    kits splash in water

    wats that?
    -dashkit

    wat?
    -featherkit

    somethings pulling me!
    - dashkit

    dashkit dragged into deeper pool, and goes under water
    featherkit races to help him

    dashkit!
    - featherkit

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  41. heelllllpp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!my brothers drowning
    -featherkit

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  42. seasonthunder rushes in and pulles both of them out and scolds them

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  43. *He padds to the Sunshine Pool with Rainfall and sits down beside her. He twined his tail with hers.*

    Sparrow

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  44. rainfall looks at him,love shown in her voice as she spoke."sparrow do you love me?"she finaly asked.i need to know the thruth she thought."because i know i love you."

    ~echoleaf

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  45. Of couse I do!

    *He nuzzled her shoulder and gave a quick lick to her ear.*

    Sparrow

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  46. she breathed a sign of releif,"i'm glad."she said licking him on the cheek."what do you want to do now?"she asked him.

    ~rainfall

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  47. I don't know. Be with you.

    *After a short pause jumped into the pool, splashing her.*

    Or swim.

    Sparrow

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  48. rainfall jumped in after him and splashed him with her tail."swimming's find with me."she said touching noses with him,before splashing him playfully at the same time.

    ~rainfall

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  49. *He growled playfully, then went under the water, pawing at Rainfall.*

    Sparrow

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  50. "hey no fair!"she said playfully fallowing him under water,she pawed at him,then came back to the surface.

    ~rainfall

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  51. *He kicked his way back to the urface, splashing Rainfall.*

    Since when is anything fair?

    *He gave a playful flick of his tail, splashing her again.*

    Sparrow

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  52. she shook her head,to dry it little,"you know as much as i love you and want to be with you,maybe we should hunt a little. that is why we came here."she told him swimming back to shore regretfully.

    ~rainfall

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  53. Okay.

    *He followed her back to shore and gave a flick of his ear to point out a pigeon.*

    Sparrow

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  54. rainfall flicked her tail,and started to prowl tawards the pigion,when she was close enough she sprang and chased it right into sparrow's paws.

    ~rainfall

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  55. *He quickly pounced on the pigeon, making his kill and purred.*

    Nice work.

    Sparrow

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  56. "nice catch.",then she spoted a rabit,"ready for another one?"she asked.

    ~rainfall

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  57. Actually, you take that. I'm gonna go for this one.

    *He pointed with his tail to a nearby vole and began to stalk it.*

    Sparrow

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  58. rainfall noded,and began to stalk the rabit,when she was close enought she jumped on it and killed it with one swift bite.after burying it with the pigion,she decided to catch some fish.she caught three,buried them with the other prey before looking for some mice.she caught the scent of two and caught them both,before heading back to pigion and fish.she layed down and waited for sparow to return from his hunt.everything is going so perfectly!first i find out that sparrow loves me as much as i love him,then brightstreaks kits!i wonder what will happen tommorow?she thought while waiting.

    ~rainfall

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  59. *He returned from hunting with the vole, a shrew and a blackbird. When he reached Rainfall, he purred and pressed his muzzle against hers.*

    Your such an amazing hunter! I'm so lucky to have you.

    Sparrowpaw

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  60. "don't you mean i'm lucky to have you?"she purred back.she licked his cheek,"i love you sparrow."she told him sincerly.

    ~rainfall

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  61. I love you, too.

    *He looked at her warmly and sat there for a moment before standing up and stretching.*

    Better get all this prey back to camp.

    Sparrow

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  62. rainfall noded,she picked up the rabit,and two mice and rebearied the fish."i'll come back for it."she mumbeled throught rabit fur and mice tails.she waited till he was ready to leave then fallowed him back to camp.

    ~rainfall

    [ok?]

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  63. rainfall paded back picked up the three fish and brought them to the freshkill pile.

    ~rainfall

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  64. Sparkpaw padded up to the beautiful shining pool. "Wow!" she exclaimed.

    ~>Sparkpaw

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  65. *He glared at her for a moment, signaling for her to be quieter.*

    This is the Sunshine Pool. Good for hunting or something. Come on, let's go.

    *He padded out of the clearing and to the River Oak.*

    -Twistedfoot

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  66. Sparkpaw followed her mentor, trying to be as silent as possible. But, she was so excited she couldn't help it.

    ~>Sparkpaw

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  67. Rosefur ran and ran and ran. She didn't see the flash of golden light ahead of her, and when she did, it was too late. She went splashing straight into the Sunshine Pool! She gasped at the shock of falling into water, warm and light as it was, and lost all her air. She struggled furiously, but because it was so light, she couldn't tell which way was up. Blackness surged in on her, and though she tried to fight it, she couldn't hold out. Somewhat happily, she gave in to the blackness...

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  68. bluetail had been pading along trying to hunt when she's herd a huge splash.she quickly ran and saw rosefur drowning in the water.she jumped in and pulled her onto the shore,oushing on her chest to try and get her to throw up some water.come on rosefur you can do it...she incouraged her,...think of nightpaw..she mewed.

    ~bluetail

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  69. Shinepaw was about to return from hunting, when she scented a familiar cat. "Rosefur!"

    She ran towards the direction of the scent and saw Rosefur struggling in the water. She dove in and tugged on her fur. She eventually pulled her out.


    ~**Shinepaw**~

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  70. Rosefur opened her eyes and looked blearily around. She moaned, coughing up lungfulls of water. "Nightpaw?" she mewed confusedly. She tried to sit up, but Bluetail and Shinepaw pushed her back down. Panicking, Rosefur yowled a weak yowl and struggled against them. "Help! The- the rogues!" she started hallucinating, seeing the great ugly rogue pinning her down, the rogue who murdered Sweetpaw coming towards her, about to deal the death blow... "Nightpaw!!!"
    ~Rosefur
    (BTW, Thanks, you guys!)

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  71. [your welcome]

    bluetail tried to sooth rosefur,it's ok rosefur it's just us shinepaw and bluetail,your safe.the rogues are gone,your sae now.she mewed gently and reusringly.

    ~bluetail

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  72. Shinepaw stared in silence as Bluetail was calming Rosefur down.


    ~**Shinepaw**~

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  73. "I-But..." she sighed. "They haunt my dreams." she admitted, hollow-eyed. "I think they always will. It's not just the rogues, either. It's Sweetpaw. She's there, running, playing in my dreams. Every time I close my eyes, I see her body... Broken." Rosefur sat up, glaring at Bluetail and Shinepaw, her lips drawn back in a snarl, her eyes wild. "You should have left me to drown! That's what StarClan wants. They want me dead!"
    ~Rosefur

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  74. bluetail looked at rosefur and frowned.
    "what about nightpaw,do you realy want to make him suffer more?" she reasoned with rosefur."and what about the proficie!if you don't fufill it the whole clan could die!"bluetail tried to reason again."do you realy want that,would sweetpaw realy want you do that?"she asked rosefur still frowning.

    ~bluetail

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  75. "I don't know anymore!" she wailed, eyes wide and gleaming with pain. "I think I should talk to Miststar. Maybe... And as for Nightpaw." her eyes turned icy again. "We we're forbidden to so much as look at eachother. By now, I wouldn't be surprised if he's moved on." turning around, she padded miserably back towards camp.
    ~Rosefur

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  76. bluetail looked over to shinepaw."shinepaw?do you think you could get nightpaw at riveroak for tommorow night?"she asked the apprentice."i think,no i know that nightpaw still loves rosefur.if we get them secretly together for just a moment,i'm certain rosefur would be happier."she explained to the apprentice."so do you think you can?"she asked her.

    ~bluetail

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  77. "Sure! And I'm certain that Nightpaw still has feelings for Rosefur!" Shinepaw already began padding back to camp.


    ~**Shinepaw**~

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  78. bluetail noded and ran after rosefur.[back to camp.

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