Sunday, May 30, 2010

Apprentices' Den

This is where the apprentices sleep. Comment here to talk to them.

-Dewstar

188 comments:

  1. "Hey, Skypaw. We're going hunting with Stormwater, Otterpaw, and Songheart at the Great Stone. Let's go!"
    ~Cloverstreak

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  2. "Lightpaw? Are you up for a battle training session today?" Brookshadow pokes her head into the den.

    ~Brookshadow

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  3. [Lightpaw is at the Great Stone helping to drive away a fox, but I'll post here after the fox is gone.]

    ~Lightpaw

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  4. Talonpaw stretches after a short nap, and pads out of the den, hoping that Fernflame would be able to take him training or hunting.

    ~Talonpaw

    [yeah ok sure]

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  5. Just at that moment, Fernflame padded out of the warrior den.

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  6. Fernpaw walks in and looks around."Wow, this den is nice and cozy," she says. Fernpaw goes to her cozy new moss nest and lays down to sleep, eagar to start training at dawn.

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  7. Fernpaw awakes at dawn with a big YAWN. Realizing it is the first day of her apprentice training, she springs up and dashes out of the den to the fresh kill pile to get a quick breakfeast.

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  8. Duskpaw wakes slowly before realizing it's his first day of training. He eagerly strides outside for some breakfast.

    ~Duskpaw

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  9. Ravenpaw's eyes brake open from a deep sleep. He rises from his nest and streaches, realizing it is time for training.Hea walks calmly out of the den to the fresh kill pile for breakfeast.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  10. Ravenpaw sits calmy outside the den waiting for someone he can go hunting with. >We could use more fresh prey, but who will go hunting with me? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm...<

    ~Ravenpaw

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  11. Duskpaw walks back to the apprentice's den and sees Ravenpaw outside. He mews a brief hello to him before walking away to lay in the shade neer the den.

    ~Duskpaw

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  12. Fernpaw sleeps in today, for her mentor is probably doing the same thing. Why worry about training right now? It seem all the mentors are asleep....

    ~Fernpaw

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  13. Ravenpaw nods a greeting to Duskpaw and watches him go lay in the shade. Ravenpaw stands up ad then goes to join him. Perhaps he can be friends with Duskpaw.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  14. Ravenpaw greets Duskpaw and then asks, "My mentor is still slepping. How about yours?"

    ~Ravenpaw

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  15. "Hello again," Duskpaw mumbles, "I can't wait to go train or hunt or something but I can't find my mentor!" "Maby she's on a patroll or something," he adds quietly.

    ~Duskpaw

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  16. *facepaw* I know I always have MANY TYPOS AND GRAMMER ISUES, but please, forgive me. You can usally tell what the word is suppost to be so why does it matter? if you can't figure out what the heck a word is, THEN you can tell me about the typo.

    ~SunsetBubble

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  17. Ravenpaw nods, he has the same problem. "Maybe we could go hunting together?" he asks thoughtfully.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  18. (nobody's worried about typos its your constant typo apologies that are annoying!)

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  19. (Sorry! I'll try not to do it again..)

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  20. "But today's our first day of aprenticeship! We can't go without our mentors or a patroll mousebrain!" Duskpaw quietly yowled.

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  21. Fine, do what you like, I'll go hunting myself!
    (that was a spark of aggression in Ravenpaw's voice, he can't help it, he just gets mad sometimes.)

    ~Ravenpaw

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  22. "Fine, but we'll see who has the last laugh when you're changing the elders' bedding and rubbing mouse bile on them for ticks!" Duskpaw hissed.

    ~Duskpaw

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  23. Ravenpaw lays down in the shade and eats his rabbits. YUM. After that he goes into the apprentice to curl up in his nest for a nap.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  24. Stormwater walks by the remains of a rabbit and smells the scent of the newly apprenticed Ravenpaw and growls. He walks into the apprentices' den and says, "Ravenpaw, get out here."

    -Stormwater

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  25. Ravenpaw walks out of the den and looks and Stormwater. "Yes?" he asks.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  26. "Well this ought to be interesting," mumbled Duskpaw.

    ~Duskpaw

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  27. " I wonder what happened..." Tigerfang muttered.

    -Tigerfang

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  28. "You are not supposed to be out hunting. I found your rabbit remains out in the orest. Hunt for the clsn first, not yourself," she says, then walking past him into the warriors' den.

    (No escuse for him, he's just that way. Senior Warrior.)

    -Stormwater

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  29. Ravenpaw nods and says, "I'm sorry, Stormwater."

    ~Ravenpaw

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  30. "I told you so!" Duskpaw meowed to Ravenpaw. "Don't worry I'll stop by and visit you in tne elder's den," he added playfully.

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  31. Duskpaw walks in after an unsuccesfull attempt at finding his trouble making friend.

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  33. Fernpaw runs inside and curls up in a tight ball in her nest. Her heart feels broken and there are tears in her eyes. Ferncloud just found out that Otterwhisker likes Mistfire, not her. (this is when Bramblepaw comes to comfort her and then Fernpaw likes Brablepaw)

    ~Fernpaw

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  34. Bramblepaw padded in, exhausted from a day of battle training. He noticed Fernpaw curled up and crying.

    "Hey, are you okay?" he asked

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  35. Fernpaw looks up but says nothing. Her eyes are filled with tears.

    ~Fernpaw

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  36. Duskpaw calmly walks in. "Hey, have you guys seen Ravenp-" he stops short when he sees the scene. "Woah," he mews quietly, "I'm not so good at comforting...or understanding what's going on most of the time, so....I think I'll just stay outta this..." He slowly moves to a far corner of the den and lays down.

    ~Duskpaw

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  37. Ravenpaw walks in and heads to his nest, tired after his punishment. He heads to his nest and lays down.(his nest is next to duskpaw's) "Hello, Duskpaw," he meows, "What's going on over there?" Ravenpaw flicks his tail tord Fernpaw and Bramblepaw.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  38. Ravenpaw walks in and goes to his nest, tired after a long day.(his nest is next to Duskpaw's) "Hello, Duskpaw," he meows, "Do you know what's going on over there?" Ravenpaw flicks his tail tord Fernpaw and Bramblepaw.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  39. "I have no idea," he replied. " I'm staying in here and butting out so I can find out," Duskpaw wispered.

    ~Duskpaw

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  40. Ravenpaw nods and meows "I think I'll do the same,"

    ~Ravenpaw

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  41. Fernpaw mews quietly to Bramblepaw, "It's nothing..I just... I-I'm not feeling..to h-happy...you wouldn't ...w-want to hear about it..,"

    ~Fernpaw

    (I'm going to talk for Bramblepaw cuz he's not here)

    Bramblepaw looked Fernpaw sincerily in the eyes and said, "Of course I do,"

    ~Bramblepaw

    Fernpaw blinked away her tears, she was touched by Bramblepaw's words. She began to tell him why she was crying, "Well, I thought I loved Otterwhisker, but Mistfire does, too. Now Otterwhisker loves Mistfire and I came back here crying because I thought that I was left heart broken and alone. I thought that I was alone. I thought,"
    (Fernpaw emfesizes the word thought every time she says it)

    ~Fernpaw

    Bramblepaw looked at her with soft eyes and asked,"You thought?"

    ~Bramblepaw

    Fernpaw nodded and looked at Bramblepaw with a loving gaze. "Yes, I thought," she said, "but I was wrong, I have you. Thank you, Bramblepaw," Fernpaw rubbed her cheek agenst Bramblepaw's and purred. She layed her head down and closed her eyes to sleep.

    ~Fernpaw

    Bramblepaw purred before curling up beside Fernpaw and drifting off to sleep.

    ~Bramblepaw

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  42. Duskpaw looked at Ravenpaw with a strange look on his face. "Well...that WAS interesting...and awkward...but,...come to think of it, when I was heading toward the river oak earlier I saw Mistfire run off crying and Otterwhisker chasing her with a shocked and confused look on his face," Duskpaw whispered. "And I saw Mistfire looking sadly at the nursery," He added. "...oh why does everything around here have to be so dramatic and confusing!?" Duskpaw snorted. Before falling asleep he mumbled under his breath, "I just wanna get on with...*yawn* training..."

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  43. Fernpaw blinks her pale green eyes open on a bright new day. Though somewhere in her heart she still loves Otterwhisker, most of her love for him had been pushed out of the way when she realized, that a better match for her has been there the whole time. Fernpaw is not mad at Mistfire for "stealing" Otterwhisker from her anymore, for Fernpaw has a tom of her own now, and she feels more confident being with Bramblepaw, because she knows that she will be loved back.

    ~Fernpaw

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  44. Fernpaw looks and Bramblepaw, still curled un sleeping beside her. She gently licks is ear and purrs quietly, not waking Bramblepaw, just soothing him while he sleeps. Fernpaw rises to her feet, shakes the moss off her pelt, and stretches. She pads calmly out of the den, and to the fresh kill pile to get some breakfeast.

    ~Fernpaw

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  45. Fernpaw walked calmly over to a shady spot outside of the den to eat her breakfeast. The day was as sunny as always, but to Fernpaw it seemed brighter and the sunny air tasted sweeter. Fernpaw felt overflowing with happiness. All her trubles seemed to have just dissapeared. When she was done with her mouse, she stayed laying in the shady place, watching the day go on until she was needed for daily work or training.

    ~Fernpaw

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  46. Duskpaw awoke slowly, still tired from his confusing first day as an apprentice. He looked around to see a few of the other apprentices still sleeping. Duskpaw quietly shook the moss from his pelt and strolled out toward the fresh kill pile.

    ~Duskpaw

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  47. Fernpaw pads into the den and lays in her nest to rest. She had a great time with Bramblepaw at the Sunshine Pool, but now she is tired. She closes her eyes hoping for sleep and dreams of Bramblepaw.

    ~Fernpaw

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  48. Leafpaw blinked open her tired eyes. "I wonder how my first day of an apprentice will go." She slowly got up and padded out of the den and headed towards the fresh-kill pile. On the way, she noticed her denmate, Flamepaw. "Wow, he's sooo cute!" she thought.

    She suddenly shook her head. "What's wrong with me?!I should be concentrating on training. Why does everything have to be so dramatic around here?"

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  49. Bramblepaw opened his eyes slowly, still tired from sleep. He suddenly thought about Fernpaw, and reviewed the time by the Sunshine Pool. He strolled out of the den and towards the fresh-kill pile, still thinking about her.

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  50. Flamepaw looks around outside the apprentices' den looking for someone to hunt with,and spots Leafpaw. He ran over to her and asked, "Hey Leafpaw! Wanna go hunting together? The fresh kill pile looks like it needs restocking" Flamepaw smiled.

    -Flamepaw

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  52. Fernpaw stared at Flamepaw, her eyes wide open. "He's talking to me! What if I say something embarrassing back?" she thought.

    "Sure!" she meowed, trying to hide her nervousness.

    They padded out of camp together, heading towards the beach. The sand crunched softly under their pads, and they separated to hunt. Each cat thinking about the other.

    -Leafpaw

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  53. Ravenpaw stretched and padded out of the den, tord the fresh kill pile.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  54. Ravenpaw padded in and quickly layed down in his nest and fell asleep.

    ~Ravenpaw

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  55. brightpaw comes into the den,and looks at ravenpaw.helooks so peaceful she though.then she padds foward and gently presses her paw on his side to wake him gently."ravenpaw..wake up...your do for a hunting patrol with tigerfang and skyfeather.she says gently.maybe he'll be my friend she thinks,he is realy nice.

    -echoleaf

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  56. i'm sorry ,i ment to type -brightpaw,but i wrote ecoleaf in staed

    -brightpaw

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  57. Fernpaw stands up and stretches. She shakes the moss off her pelt. Fernpaw looks beside her and sees Bramblepaw waking up. "Good morning, Bramblepaw," she meows sweetly to him.
    (pretend its morning)

    ~>Fernpaw

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  58. Flamepaw sat in the dark corner of the den, pretending to sleep, listening to Fernpaw and Bramblepaw.

    -Flamepaw

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  59. Bramblepaw looked up at Fernpaw. "Hey. Wanna go on a walk with me, before anyone wakes up?" He smiled at her.


    -Bramblepaw

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  60. Ferpaw nodded, "Let's go to the beach," she whispered and padded out of the den

    ~>Fernpaw

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  61. Flamepaw waited until Fernpaw and Bramblepaw were outside of the den, and padded out with them, hiding behind trees and bushes along the way.

    -Flamepaw

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  62. Ravenpaw woke up, noticing that a few apprentices where already awake and out of the den. He stood up and shook the moss off his pelt. He stretched and padded out of the den. He desided to go enjoy the early morning in peace, at the River Oak.

    ~>Ravenpaw

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  63. once ravenpaw was awake,and left to do some morning hunting,brightpaw decided to do her own hunting from what her sister had shown her.i'll go to the beach she decided.

    -brightpaw

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  64. rainpaw and brightpaw cuddled together and cried in grief."do you think echoleaf is happy in starclan?"asked rainpaw."i know she is."anserwd brightpaw.they had spent the night in a vigel for there mother.when rainpaw was sure that brightpaw was asleep,she sneeked out of the den and headed towards mistar's den.

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  65. Greypaw walks in, having truble keeping calm because he is excited to be an apprentice. He pads over to his new nest and lays down. He feels a bit uncomfortale at first, because he knew he wouldn't get to sleep agenst him mother's belly. But, he knew he would get used to it. He layed his head down and closed his icy blue eyes. Soon he dozed off, then fell asleep.

    ~>Greypaw

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  66. Greypaw woke up, eagar to start training. He stood up and padded out of the den, to the fresh kill pile.

    ~>Greypaw

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  67. Windpaw pads in, gazing around at the new den. She's going to miss the nursery, though is excited to be an apprentice. Windpaw finds a nice spot in the corner of the den, next to her sister Willowpaw and lays down, longing to make friends or talk to more apprentices.

    -Windpaw

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  68. Talonswoop steps inside the apprentices' den, looking for Graypaw, and then spots him. "Graypaw, we're going to do some battle training and then some hunting if you're not too tired."

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  69. brightpaw turns tawards the newest apprentices and stops her gaze on windpaw.maybe she would like to be my friend?she thought feeling pretty lonly herself and missing echoleaf alot too.

    ~brightpaw

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  70. Windpaw, still looking around for friends to make in the den, spotted Brightpaw. Windpaw walked over and shuffled her paws. "Umm....I'm kinda new as an apprentice, so I don't have many friends, only my siblings. And I was wondering if you would like to be one?"

    (wow....that sounded kinda weird.)

    -Windpaw

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  71. Icefrost poked her head into the Apprentices' Den. "Birchpaw, meet me at the Training Hollow, we're going to do some battle training."

    -Icefrost

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  72. "sure i would love to be your friend i feel lonly without echoleaf around anymore and i love rainpaw but it's not the same,i'm going hunting with ravenshadow right now but after word we could do something fun!"said brightpaw happy to finaly have a friend.

    ~brightpaw

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  73. Windpaw smiled. "Sure Brightpaw, see you later, and have fun!"


    -Windpaw

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  74. Windpaw sat down, happy to have a friend, and excited for training. She curled up into a ball and slept, deciding to take a nap until Brightpaw comes back.

    -Windpaw

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  75. Rosekit peered cautiously into the den. "Scorchkit, look! Here are all the apprentices' nests! I can't wait to be an apprentice... But if Lilykit was a medicine cat, then she wouldn't sleep here with us! Why would she be a medicine cat, anyways? Those herbs were icky!"
    ~Rosekit

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  76. Windpaw opened one eye and smiled, amused at the kits' reactions. She sat up and stretched, and padded over to the fresh kill pile.

    -Windpaw

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  77. Rosekit bounced behind Windpaw. "Hi! Did I wake you up? I didn't mean to... Scorchkit and Lilykit were showing me the camp! But Lilykit stayed behind so it was just me and Scorchkit. Do you have to go train? Is it hard? Have you ever been in a battle? Were you scared? Is it hard to be an apprentice?" she eagerly fired one question after another at Windpaw.
    ~Rosekit

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  78. Windpaw turned around and smiled. Hi Rosekit. You did wake me up but it's fine. No, I don't have to go train today, but I do have to go hunting. No, I haven't been in a battle, I would love the excitement of one though. And I guess it's hard being an apprentice, it just depends. But you'll know soon enough right? Do you think you're ready to be an apprentice?

    -Windpaw

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  79. "Yeah! Watch this!" she crouched down low, and pressed her body to the ground. Suddenly, she jerked upwards and spun around in the air, landing neatly on to of Windpaw's shoulders.
    ~Rosekit

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  80. Windpaw smiled. "Great! When you're older I bet you'll be great at fighting! Do you know how to hunt yet? Or do you want me to teach you?"

    -Windpaw

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  81. "Oh, teach me please please please PLEASE! Then I'll show Dapplekit and she'll be SO jealous!" Rosekit bounced with excitement, her heart so full of joy at the thought of being taught how to hunt by Windpaw.
    ~Rosekit

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  82. Willowpaw glanced over at the kits and Windpaw, then looked away. She walked towards the Fresh-Kill Pile.


    ~Willowpaw

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  83. "Ok. So when your hunting a mouse, step lightly, but when hunting a rabbit be very quiet. So crouch down low, your belly fur nearly touching the ground. Then creep forward, but watch out for the twigs that you may step on and make the prey run away. And with a final leap, bite it's neck and if it goes limp, your done! Do you want to try now?"

    -Windpaw

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  84. "Hi Willowpaw! Windpaw is teaching me how to hunt! Do you-?" She broke off when Willowpaw walked away. Rosekit looked confused, nobody had ever done that to her before. Maybe she hadn't heard... "Willowpaw!" Rosekit ran a few steps over to Willowpaw. "Hi!"
    ~Rosekit

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  85. Windpaw looked over to her sister and padded over to her. "What's wrong?"

    -Windpaw

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  86. Following all of Windpaw's instructions carefully, Rosekit crept forwards, ever so quietly, towards Willowpaw's twitching tail. Then she pounced gracefully grabbing Willowpaw's tail with thorn-sharp claws and nipping it with needle-sharp teeth. "Got it!" she yowled triumphantly.
    ~Rosekit

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  87. Windpaw's eyes widened. "Rosekit, don't use your teeth and claws on Cloverclan cats! Other than that, that was really good!"

    -Windpaw

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  88. Willowpaw glanced at her quickly with dark, gloomy eyes. "Nothing..."she murmured.

    (sorry, but i'm gonna put something for windpaw)

    Windpaw thought she saw a flicker of anger flash across Willowpaw's face.


    ~Willowpaw

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  89. "Oh. Sorry..." Rosekit ducked her head and snuck a glance at Willowpaw. She could tell that Willowpaw wasn't happy. "I didn't mean to." she said, her tail drooping. She scurried behind Windpaw and peeked around her.
    ~Rosekit

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  90. (It's fine)

    Windpaw's eyes narrowed. She knew Willowpaw wasn't telling her something. She'll have to talk to her later. Windpaw looked back at Rosekit and said, "Hey, try hunting on that leaf over there."

    -Windpaw

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  91. "Oooh! Okay!" she eagerly crept over to the leaf,oblivious to the tension between the two sisters. The leaf, which was twitching even though there was no breeze, looked very tempting. She carefully stalked towards it, creeping like Windpaw had told her. Then she suddenly pounced, pinning the leaf down with the claws out. She was shocked when she felt movement under the leaf, and discovered a mouse. Quickly, she bopped the mouse on the head with her paw and stunned it. Not knowing what else to do, she kept bopping it until it was dead. "Look!" she called to Windpaw and Willowpaw. "I caught a mouse! A real mouse! Look!!!"
    ~Rosekit

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  92. Windpaw ran over to Rosekit. "Wow! You're a great hunter! I never thought you'd find it in our camp. Ok, you can go show it to other cats or add it to the fresh kill pile!" Windpaw's eyes gleamed. She would love to have Rosekit as a apprentice, though she knows it's not going to happen, considering she's still an apprentice herself.

    -Windpaw

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  93. "Okay! Thanks Windpaw! Bye Willowpaw! I hope you get happier!" she happily skipped off to find Scorchkit and the others.
    ~Rosekit
    (Maybe it could happen! She won't be an apprentice for a while yet so you never know!)

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  94. brigghtstreak,waited outside the nursery for windpaw to come out.i might be a warrior now she thought but windpaw's still my friend.causiously she entred the den."windpaw?"she called out.

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  95. "since you've seen the apprentices den now,would you like to see the warriors den?" scorchedkit asked ,rosekit.already heading tawards it.

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  96. "Yeah! But did you see my mouse? I want to show Cloverstreak and Stormwater and Dapplekit! I caught it myself!!!" she proudly walked over into the camp clearing with Scorchkit following behind her. (I hope it's okay that I put him following)

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  97. [ya its fine i don't mind,other peaple saying my cats did an action so long it's not something big and they don't make them say stuff.]

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  98. were gonna be sleeping here someday
    -dashkit

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  99. [brightstreak got tired of waiting for windpaw so she went to see ravenshadow.]

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  100. (Okay. But now he's an apprentice!)

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  101. [ya i know now! i didn't know at the time!]

    sweetpaw paded in.she and her litter mates found themselfs places to sleep.once settled and comfortable she tried to sleep.unfortunatly, she couldn't so she tried to get out of the den.on her way out,she bumps into fogpaw.she gently slips away,hoping not to have woken him up.once she was out she sat down,suddenly her thoughts driffted tawards fogpaw.why can't i get him out of my mind!she thought.
    [she's thinking all this.]

    ~sweetpaw

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  102. Windpaw padded into the apprentices' den, trying to find Willowpaw. "Where could she be?" Windpaw wondered. Just then, she saw a flash of dark gray tabby fur entering the den. "Willowpaw!" Windpaw padded over to her. "What happened back near the fresh kill pile? You liked playing with kits before, and you just ignored Rosekit like she was a dead leaf! What's gotten into you?" Windpaw's voice softened into a whisper, aware that other cats were still sleeping.

    -Windpaw

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  103. Willowpaw turned around and whispered, "Look, can we talk about this in private? Like, out of camp?"

    She already started to head out of camp without an answer from Windpaw.


    ~Willowpaw

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  104. Windpaw sped after her and caught up to her just as she was about to leave the camp. "Where do we go though?"

    -Windpaw

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  105. "Let's go to the Beach." she murmured. They quietly snuck out of camp and headed towards the Beach.

    (comment next at the beach)


    ~Willowpaw

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  106. "I win!" Nightkit laughed as he waited for Shinekit to arrive. He peeked inside the apprentices den. "Whoa! Imagine, this is where we're going to sleep when we're apprentices!" he whispered, trying to not wake up the apprentices.

    -Nightkit

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  107. "I know! I am sooooo stoked!!!" Shinekit shrieked. Once she realized her mistake, a couple of apprentices started stirring.

    "Oops!" the siblings raced over to the warriors' den.


    ~Shinekit

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  108. Willowpaw raced in after Windpaw and grabbed her scruff, shaking her violently.

    "Don't make me angry.." she growled (while whispering). She let go of Windpaw and walked towards her nest, and laid down. She quickly fell asleep.


    ~Willowpaw

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  109. Windpaw was shaken with fear. She moved her nest from beside Willowpaw to beside Fogkit. Her heart was thumping as blood poured down her face and dripped onto the ground.

    (Read about it at the beach!)

    -Windpaw

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  110. bluepaw woke up.what happen she thought?windpaw was bleeding!she got up and paded tawards heer nest."windpaw?"she wisperd."windpaw your bleeding."she wisperd again hoping to wake her.

    ~bluepaw

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  111. Willowpaw tried to hide her evil-looking smile from across the apprentices' den.


    ~Willowpaw

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  112. bluepaw began to prod windpaw gently."windpaw please wake up!" she beged scared now.

    ~bluepaw

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  113. Willowpaw calmly walked over to the panicking Bluepaw. "She's fine.........we were out hunting yesterday and she um................."

    (Willowpaw wasn't a good lier)

    "Sh-She hit a tree..." Willowpaw murmured.


    ~Willowpaw

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  114. "she's bleeding!i don't think a tree would have hurt her so bad."said bluepaw."she must have been attacked!but who would do this?"she said gravly.

    ~bluepaw

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  115. Windpaw woke up from the prodding. "Wha? Oh, hi Bluepaw." She blinked the sleep from her eyes just to remember that she was bleeding. Windpaw glanced worriedly at Willowpaw, thinking what would happen if she told someone. She ignored the feeling. "So why did you wake me up?"

    -Windpaw

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  116. Willowpaw stared at Windpaw madly.


    ~Willowpaw

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  117. Willowpaw got up wearily from her nest and padded over towards Windpaw.

    "Meet me at the Sunshine Pool......now." she growled.


    ~Willowpaw

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  118. Windpaw glared at Willowpaw. "No, I'm not going to trust you after what you did to me." Windpaw answered bravely, knowing she can't attack with the other apprentices, including Bluepaw, around.

    -Windpaw

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  119. "what is she talking about windpaw?why does she want to meet you? i woke you because your bleeding and i think you should see berrysplash right now."she told windpaw her voice non negotioble.

    ~bluepaw

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  120. "Windpaw's gonna be fine..." Willowpaw murmured. "Let's go.....NOW." she meowed, with an angry tone in her voice.


    ~Willowpaw

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  121. "She wants to meet me to scratch me more. And I'm not going, whatever you do. Everyone's around, what CAN you do?" Windpaw glared at Willowpaw, adding a hiss.

    (Kinda weird at the end.)

    -Windpaw

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  122. Willowpaw smirked. "This." she lashed out with her head at Windpaw's neck. She clamped her jaws shut, (but not hard enough to kill her).

    She let go and ran as fast as she can out of camp.


    ~Willowpaw

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  123. (btw, windpaw didn't die. she just lost a lot of blood)

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  124. Windpaw yowled with anger, frustration, and pain. Blood poured down to the ground of the apprentices den, flooding the center of the den. She collapsed to the ground, not able to get up, while glaring at Willowpaw as she sped out of the apprentices' den.

    (If you made her die, I'd be angry)

    -Windpaw

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  125. Greypaw padded into the den and was stunned by the scene. "Windpaw!" he called to his freind. He grabbed her gently and pulled her back into her nest. He ran and got some cobwebs then pressed them agenst where she was bleeding. "What happened? Who did this to you?" he meowed antously as Windpaw started to stop bleeding.

    ~>Greypaw

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  126. Windpaw smiled, happy to be helped by a friend. "Willowpaw scratched me....and bit my neck. She ran out of the camp right after..." she replied weakly, her eyes half closed.

    (she's not gonna die)

    -Windpaw

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  127. "Windpaw! Stay with me!" he meowed hoping she wouldn't die.

    ~>Greypaw

    (i know)

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  128. Windpaw sighed, and closed her eyes, breathing slowly. "I'm trying, but......Starclan may take me."

    (nvm, then. This sounds so sad.)

    -Windpaw

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  129. (wait, shes DYING?)

    "No..." Greypaw mewed sadly.

    ~>Greypaw

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  130. (Nope just didn't know what to write)


    Windpaw slept for a few moments, then woke up, still wincing, but like her regular self. "I-I got it Greypaw, thanks for helping me"

    -Windpaw

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  131. bluepaw came forward."how good willowpaw do this to her own sister?comeon windpaw you have to see berrysplash now,if these wounds get infected then you realy could die."bluepaw said worriedly and gentle at the same time."please let me take you to see berrysplash."she finished.


    ~bluepaw

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  132. [it's supposed to be could willowpaw do this...]

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  133. "are you strong enough to walk?"she asked gently."well make sure willowpaw never does this to you again."bluepaw said turning tawards greypaw at the same time.her eyes pleading with him to agree with her.

    ~bluepaw

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  134. Just a question: Is Willowpaw evil now?

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  135. "Willowpaw did this? To you? Her own sister?" Greypaw meowed, confused. "Why?"

    ~>Greypaw

    (make it so willowpaw likes greypaw and greypaw will be grrrr plz cherry!!)

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  136. (yes Willowpaw is now evil)

    "I-I'm not sure. She just took me to the beach, and this happened. I think I'm strong enough to walk to the medicine cat den..." Windpaw stood up, wobbling on all four paws. She took a step, and wobbled some more. "Yeah, I can make it."

    -Windpaw

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  137. bluepaw steped beside windpaw to steady her."ok,but i'll be right beside you just incase."she said starting out of the den tawards the medecinecat's den.

    [comment in the medecine cats's den.]

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  138. "I'll cetch up with you later, Windpaw!" he called after her. He looked at Windkit's nest, the moss was covered with blood. "I'll get her some new bedding," he meowed to himself and left the den. He came backin wish a mouth full of moss. He replaced Windpaw's bedding and left the den, to go see how she was doing.

    ~>Greypaw

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  139. (Oh dear...)
    Dapplepaw walked in and looked around. "Um... Where can I sleep?"
    ~Dapplepaw

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  140. honeyfern paded up to the apprentices den and called out"rosepaw,rosepaw it's time for some traing."

    ~honeyfern

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  141. "Oh!" Rosepaw awoke with a start and rushed out to meet Honeyfern, her eyes glowing. She had dreamed all night of fires and herself, Dapplepaw, Tide, Runningfleet, Wavekit, and Lilykit. She was baffled and tired, but ready to train again. "What are we doing today?" she asked eagerly.
    ~Rosepaw

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  142. "where going to the trainig hallow and i'm going to teach you some battle and devence attacks."she told rosepaw already heading tawards the traiing hallow.

    ~honeyfern

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  143. scorchpaw paded in,sweetkit finly be made an apprentice today,he thought."i think i'll make there nestes"he said starting tawards river oak.

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  144. he came back in and made 3 nestes for them,then he took the lily he had colected and put it in sweetpaw's nest.mistar yowled for a clan meeting.i hope she likes the flower he thought racing to the clearing.

    ~scorchpaw

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  145. [i ment lilypaw's nest,sorry.]

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  146. Dapplepaw padded stiffly in and curled up in her nest next to Rosepaw. "Rosepaw..." she murmured. "I have to tell you something. But tomorrow. I too tire..." she trailed off and fell asleep, leaving Rosepaw confused.
    ~Dapplepaw & Rosepaw

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  147. Rosepaw woke up at moonhigh and quietly crept out of the den, making sure no one heard her.

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  148. scorchpaw paded into the apprentices's den,and when no one was looking he sliped a lily into lilypaw's nest.so that he wouldn't get caught himself.he paded into his nest and settled down for a nap.

    ~scorchpaw

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  149. i know..like a secret admirer.

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  150. scorchpaw,hoping he'd naped long enough for no one to suspect ,go up and headed tawards the clearing.hoping no one saw him.

    ~scorchpaw

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  151. *She padded into her nest, tired from the day's training. Lilypaw almost sat on some lilies.*

    Aww. How nice!

    *She smealt them and tucked then under her nest, so she wouldn't lose them.*

    Lilypaw

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  152. Seriously, that's really cute! lol

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  153. sweetpaw,entred the apprentices's den and headed tawards lilypaw."did you find the lilys?"she asked curiously.

    ~sweetpaw

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  154. Yes! They're really nice, thanks.

    Lilypaw

    (Doesn't know they were from Scorchpaw.)

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  155. sweetpaw looked at lilypaw confused,"there not from me,but maybe there from a secret admirer?"sugested sweetpaw.

    ~sweetpaw

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  156. Oh, they aren't? Hmm .. I wonder who did.

    Lilypaw

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  157. "maybe it was berrypaw or cougerpaw?maybe even scorchpaw?"sugested sweetpaw.

    ~sweetpaw

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  158. *She looked around.*

    Maybe.

    Lilypaw

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  159. "aren't you happy?"sweetpaw asked.

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  160. then to change the subject,she asked,"have you seen rosepaw?honeyfern was looking for her earlier.i'm starting to think she hurt..."said sweetpaw worriedly.

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  161. then looking at her lilypaw,she said"you know what i think i'm going to try and fallow her scent trail..just to make sure she's ok.do you want to come with me?"she said,waiting for lilypaw to reply.

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  162. Yes, but that sounds bad. I wish I could, but I have to fo training with Leafpool, Jaysong, and Wavepaw. Sorry!

    *She slid out of the apprentices' den to head to the Training Hollow.*

    Lilypaw

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  163. lilypaw,not wasting time,went to rosepaw's nest,and started to fallow her trail.she fallowed to the freshkill pile and then,smellet nightkit,and two other strages sents.

    ~sweetpaw

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  164. sorry it's sweetpaw not wasting time went to rosepaw's nest..

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  165. Dapplepaw padded into the den, her eyes wild. "Sweetpaw hasn't come back! And Dapplepaw and Nightkit aren't here either!"
    ~Dapplepaw

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  166. [if you want to see what happened to sweetpaw go to the beach.]

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  167. (wait, Echoleaf, srry, I was away 4 two weeks so imma little behind, does Sweetpaw like Fogpaw? lol sorry)

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  168. [well she did but,well she died..no one knows yet.go to the beach to see what happened.]

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  169. scorchpaw,over heard her."what!?!i have to get bluepaw and go find her!"he said determinldly.what was sweetpaw thinking?he thought franticly.

    ~scorchpaw

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  170. "No, Scorchpaw, wait. Miststar has fobidden us to leave the camp... It's too dangerous!"
    ~Dapplepaw

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  171. "she's my sister!i can't leave her,out there alone!and what about rosepaw?don't you want to go out there and find her?"he asked her helplesly.

    ~scorchpaw

    [he's stuck in the middle right now,he wants to find his sister but he also wants to obey miststar.]

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  172. just then he herd mistar calling for a meeting,and steped out to see what was going on.

    ~scorchpaw

    [saved by the clan meeting.]

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  173. Dapplepaw looked at Scorchpaw with understanding and misery in her eyes and just shook her head. Hearing Miststar's call, she ran out after Scorchpaw. (Yeah, lucky one there!)

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  174. featherpaw entered her new den and instantly took liking to a shady cool , but cozy spot
    -featherpaw
    dashpaw made a spot next to her
    -dashpaw

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  175. dashpaw padded out to hunting patrol as featherpaw departed her brother too border patrol

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  176. snowkit led the way to the apprentice's den.this is were me and cherrykit will be sleeping soon.he boastes to starkit and cinderkit.cinderkit looked up at snowkit and cherrykit.realy..she askes astonished.yup.anserws cherrykit proudly.starkit rolls her eyes,and says can we go to the medeciecat's den now.cherrykit nods and leads the way there.

    -kits

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  177. Nightpaw blinked his eyes out of sleep. "Another day with the elders." he yawned. Suddenly Sweetpaw came running in the entrence of the den, making Nightpaw's eyes widen in surprise.


    -Nightpaw

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  178. (sigh)

    "Nightpaw! Nighpaw! Nightpaw!" Shinepaw screamed.

    "Hello, older brother! Why don't we have a little chat! You know, about Rosefur?"

    ~**Shinepaw**~

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  179. (:P)

    Nightpaw cocked his head. "Umm...sure...what about her?"

    -Nightpaw

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  180. Shinepaw blurted out every single thing that happened at the Sunshine Pool.

    "So then, Bluetail wanted you to go to the River Oak to meet up with her!"


    ~**Shinepaw**~

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  181. Nightpaw had a nervous glint in his eye. "The punishment..." he paused. "I'll do it later. Thanks sis!" Nightpaw took off running toward the River Oak.


    -Nightpaw

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  182. "Hey! Wait up!" Shinepaw called as she raced after Nightpaw.


    ~**Shinepaw**~

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  183. Palepaw glanced at her brother. "Let's go somewhere fun!" she burst out.

    -palepaw

    Cougarpaw snorted. "We can't. And i can't believe we're not warriors yet!"

    -cougarpaw

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