echoleaf and her kits had caught 2 mice and a squirel.brightpaw and rainpaw were about to catch a rabit together.echoleaf watched them with pride.rainpaw pounced and caught the rabit.suddenly echoleaf smelled something."it smells like dog"...then she saw it a big slobering brown beast.it was going to attack her kits!"brightpaw,rainpaw climb a tree quick!"brightpaw climed a tree straight away but rainpaw was to late the dog had already spotted her.echoleaf jumped in frote of rainpaw."climb a tree now all keep it busy!"rainpaw climed the tree next to them.while echoleaf batted at the dog. once rainpaw was in the tree and safe echoleaf fallowed her up the tree but the dog wasn't giving up on prey and pulled her down by her back paw.once she fell on the ground it bit her neck but before it could kill her she bit hard down on his tail and he went whining back to it's tolegs.echoleaf stood blood poring from her neck,both apprentices ruhed to there mothers side."echoleaf you beat it,you beat it!"they cheered suddenly brightpaw noticed that echoleaf was saking."echoleaf are you ok?" then she fell weak and dieing.both of her kits gatherd around her."echoleaf don't leave us!"screeched rainpaw with greaf.then with her last breath echoleaf said"kits i love you more then anything but i must leave you, starclan are calling me,honeyfern my sister will look out for you.."she wisperd.rainpaw and brightpaw let out mews of grief."we love you."they told her together before her eyes turned grey and she stared into nough thing."lets get her back to camp"said brightpaw tearfully.rainpaw stared at her mother."it's my falt shes dead!,will they realy want me back?"she asked her sister tearfully."of coarse they will!"brightpaw anserwd.rainpaw looked at her sister trusting her completly."could you pick her up by the back fur ,i'll pick her up by the scruff.with that they carried her back to camp and laid her in the middle of the clearing. [see clearing to see what happens.]
He pawed at the cobwebs in the branch and hobbled over to Mallownose. Tigerclaw pressed them to her leg. "Any idea what's good for an enfection?" he asked.
"You don't need her! I need her! I haven't seen Stoneblaze and Flowerseed in moons! Why do I need to travel with you?? I hate you!" Mallownose ranted growling and twitching her hind leg.
He didn't look around to face her. Well, I love you, he wanted to say. "Fine," he growled to her. "You couldn't make it to them anyway. I'M the reason you alive!"
"Your the reason I am wounded! Think of it like this, if I was traveling with Willowfeather or Poppyfrost or Darkfang or Flowerseed would I really be this wounded? Even if I was we could just go to the nearest clan and get help!" Mallownose hissed.
"Well how come we don't go to a different territory? Mothfang (I think, Poppyfrosts mother) lives with Dustfang across the moor, she starting her own clan!" Mallownose growled
"Yes you do! I can see it in your face! What are you going to do?" Mallownose un-curled from her tight ball, wincing as her leg brushed the forest floor.
Mallownose felt heart-broken. But why? She shook the feeling away and gulped loudly "I will" she sunk out of the bush and limped rapidly away from him.
"Well then there's another one. And the scents strong, too. Like it's right the-" he was cut off from a hiss from behind. He turned around as a snake slithered into thier path, blocking them.
Tawnyfur wrestled with the snake. It was strong, and she stuggled to stay away from it's mouth. But she clawed in scatched, ony a few of her blows even left a mark in the scaly skin.
Cloudfire burst into the forest, grabbing Sparrowkit's scruff and putting him back "Stay with your brother!" he growled leaping on the snake digging his claws in deep
Cloudfire ran over to his mate pressing his nose into her fur "There is no fire," then he saw the bite in her side and his eyes filled with pain "NO!" he cired "NO NO!"
"Yes there is!" She exclaimed, it's everywhere!" she said, slowly closing her eyes. "Everywhere....." she mummered, and then collapsed, limp and lifeless.
>Tawnyfur<
(THIS WAS THE HARDEST THING I HAD TO WRITE EVER, OK!?!?! )
Cloudfire felt tears burn down his cheeks. He looked at his kits, he buried his nose in Tawnyfur's pelt "I'll take good care of them, for you, I love you, forever and always," he sobbed He grabbed her scruff "K-kits," he mewed shakily, taking her body back to camp
"It's all our fault, DArkeningkit! If we hadn't snuck out, that snake wouldn't have ran into us and mom wouldn't have to save us. She would still be alive!"
Cloudfire looked at his kits "No, Darkeningkit... Tawnyfur is... is," he gulped his eyes brimming with new tears "gone, she will never come back," he cried barely contrillong his emotions wanting to just let it all go, scream to StarClan that they shouldn't have taken her. That they should give her back right now because it was not fair she had kit who needed her he needed her...
He curled up in a tight ball and allowed himself to be carried, before whispering to Darkeningkit, "We have to be strong. For dad. Fogkit. Windkit and Willowkit."
Leafpool padded through the thick brambles of the forest, and suddenly scented Flametail. She saw him hunting a rabbit. He chased it around the clearing, until he reached it and killed it in one swipe.
Flametail looked up, fur on his back starting to bristle (thinks it's Brambleheart), rabbit dangling from his jaws. "Oh hi Leafpool, I didn't see you there. Thanks, but I could have done better then a scrawny rabbit." He looked down at his piece of prey.
"I think you're the best hunter AND fighter in Cloverclan!!" she smiled. "And don't mind Brambleheart. All he can think about now is Fernstream! And you don't look that bad with that scar, you actually look more handsome..." Leafpool suddenly blurted out without thinking.
"Thanks for all the compliments, but I don't think I'm even near the best hunter and fighter yet. I agree on the Brambleheart part though. Never thinking that he shouldn't be out playing with Fernstream when he could be hunting for the clan! And....I do?" Flametail felt the tips of his ears go red. "Wait what?! I can't be in love with her! I-I....need to be a warrior. Although....she's not a bad cat." He thought.
Flametail's eyes widened. "How? I never thought she could like someone with a scar on his eye." he thought. "I've liked you too Leafpool...I've been getting this weird feeling in my heary every time I look at you. I-I really do love you." Flametail calmed down, licking Leafpool's ear.
rainfall had caught 2 rabits,a squirel.her sister brightstreak had caught 3 mice and a sparow.thinking they had enough prey and how fast the sun was setting she said:"let's get back to camp the gathering will be soon.with that they set off tawards camp.
Sparkit walks into the forest, stunned. "Wow," is all she can say. She looks around checking if anyone is following, then pads on in the direction of the beach. Whitekit pads into the forest nurvously, still tracking is mistivous(i think its spell wrong idc) sister.
featherkit quickly stalks him but finds a fat rabbit , ill kill that and take it back, quickly jumps and lands on prey and swipes at neck wow i caught my first prey! she digs hole and buries it, and follows whitekit -featherkit
Ravenshadow stalks fallowing the scent of a sparrow. He sees it, he spings, and kills it. He burys his fresh-kill then goes off to find more. After a bit of hunting, he also has a rabbit and two mice. He carries his mouth full of fresh kill back to camp.
Greypaw leads his mother Dovecloud into the forest. "Where do you want to walk to?" he asked. "Umm....take me to the River Oak please," she meowed. "Are you sure? You will have to swim," Greypaw meowed. "I know and I know how you can help me," Dovecloud meowed, half her mind wondering, somewhere else. Together they padded to the River Oak.
rainfall purred,"sure where do you wanna go?"she mewed cheerfully.her spitits rising just thinking about it.why do i feel this way?she thouht. he is just anouther apprentice.right?for some reason she wasen't so sure anymore.every time he looks in my derection my ear tips turn red and and i'm at lost for words,could i be in love? well if this is love then i never want it to go away.she thought.
"it's ok,she's been dead for awhile,sorry to hear about yours,she died while you where still a kit.at least mine lived till after i was an apprentice."she said sadly.turning to happier thoughts.she said " you know we'll be having new clanmates soon.brightstreak is going to be having ravenshadow's kits.i hope i'll have kits of my own one day too"she said cheerfully.
Dawnfire padded quietly- not loud enough for Sparrowpaw to hear- and purred down at the blind apprentice. "She does love you, you know. I know enough about love to tell that from her. If Starclan destinies you two to be together, then you surely will," she meows, trying to comfort the young apprentice, as she could tell the look on his face was of someone who thought he was denied love.
The light brown she-cat padded quietly through CloverClan territory. She stopped, and turned her head. "Strike! This way!" she called, heading tord the River Oak.
-A Rouge
(They can make their den in the hollow bottom of the River Oak)
"But I was around here the other day, and I found a great place! It's in the middle of the stream, I don't think the clan cats even go there..." Lily replied. "And we need to find some place! It's mostly clan territory everywhere around here, anyway. COme on!" she meowed and padded off, to the River Oak.
Chloe ran through the forest, wishing she could be safe at home with her housefolks, but not after what Drake had told her. She found a gap in the tree roots making a kind of den. She squeezed iinside, it was sheltered from the wind. But what was she going to eat? What was she going to drink. She sobbed putting her head down, she thought back to what had made her leave.
Chloe had been sitting out on front of Her Housefolk's nest. Edgar had come by, her brother looked at her funny "You're getting big..." Chloe had chuckled "Of course, I'm going to have kittens!" Edgar eyes had widened and he ran to get the rest of their brothers and sisters. Soon they were all they, Marmalade, Drake and Chris. "What is all this fuss?" Marmalade looked down "Your kittens, you can't keep them you know that?" Drake had nodded in agreement "And they'll probably take you to the Cutter after they've found out!" Chloe's eyes had widened, she didn't want her kits to be taken away from her! She didn't want to e sent to the cutter least of all! "I... I" she muttered, then she had run. She had no idea where... and now she was here, hungry, thirsty and tired, no way to take care of taking care of her kittens... great
a mouse scuttled around, quickly seasonthunder whispered to her kits think you could catch that? -seasonthunder dashkit crept up on it and pounced and killed it quickly -dashkit good job! -seasonthunder wind began to blow and the kits and there mother went back to camp
Chloe sighed padding out, she sniffed trying to smell food, maybe she could catch a mouse... it sure wouldn't be as tastey as the fish flavored food her two-legs gave her, but it would at least be food, and she had to eat, her kittens would be coming any day now and she had to eat to give them milk.
She crouched poucing on a mouse clumsily and barely killing it, with all the noise she made, she must have scared off all the prey in the forest! She padded back to her den, curling in the warmth and begging to eat the mouse
twilightivy padded in the forest sunlight shining on her fur,she noticed a mouse and quickly crept on her pawsand lunged, later she caught 2 thrushes and 3 voles -twilightivy
but as she was headed back to camp she heard roaring she looked behind and caughta glance at a big badger, her heart was beating hard, she felt like racing to camp but she stood there frozen in fear -twilightivy (please comment :))
Chloe began to pant hard, she knew her kittens were coming right now!! She winced digging her claws into the ground she felt the first kit come
~~~~~(After the kitting~~~~~
Chloe curled around four kittens, they were all beautiful, she ran through the names her mother and Marmalade had given her as suggestions before she had ran. She purred she would be able to keep all these kits,
She looked at the oldest kitten, a brown and black tom "Skylar," she purred, the second a black and white she-cat "Piper," she purred, the third, a silver tabby tom "Zoroark," and a sandy ginger she-cat "Fiona,"
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Here r there pics, and Clan names (if u need them) Madi :) They'll join the Clan soon!
Chloe (Played by me, Clan name- Anything starting with Poppy) http://www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photography/cats/05418.jpg
Skylar (Played by me, Clan Name- Skykit, Skyflare) http://www.junglefirebengals.co.uk/images/showstars/strider.jpg
Piper (Played by Del, Clan Name- Piperkit) http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3544/3469557786_db10db3d5c.jpg
Zoroark (Played by Savortheflavor, Clan Name- Shortkit) http://image.absoluteastronomy.com/images/encyclopediaimages/p/pl/playful_kitten.jpg
Fiona (Played by me, Clan name- Sandkit, Sandthorn) http://www.dailypets.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/selkirkrex1.jpg
*Miststar walked around, towards where the fire had started when she noticed a loner. She tensed up and hissed at the she-cat until she noticed the four newborn kits.*
Who are you? And .. why are you here, with your kits?
Chloe's eyes widened "I-i'm sorry! I lived with my twolegs, but then.. I realized if i couldn't live with them if I was there... So I ran here, I'm Chloe, and these are my kits, Skylar, Piper, Fiona and Zoroark,"
*She gave her chest fur a couple of embarresed licks.*
It's Miststar, now. I left my housefolk to live in the forest. To live in a clan. CloverClan. Now I'm the leader and I even have kits of my own. I see you do as well.
Well, we're a group of cats that live in the forest together. The warriors hunt and fight for the clan, while the apprentices train. There are queens and kits that provide hte youth of the clan and the medicine cats, they heal us and give us wisdom from our warrior ancestors.
Greyfrost charged into the forest, then stopped. He was breathing hard. He looked back, to see how far behind Stormfrost and Windpelt were.>I have to admit, I'm fast!< he thought. Greyfrost shuffled his paws, he was alone with his thoughts. He realized how he liked both Windpelt and Stormfrost, and they liked him too. >I think I'm in love....with two she-cats...< he thought worried.
Windpelt sped behind him, panting. "I've never seen you run this fast!" She flicked his ear, looking back to see Stormfrost speeding along. "So, we'll hunt as soon as Stormfrost gets here." Windpelt smiled.
Greyfrost nodded, looking dreamily into Windpelt's eyes. He shook himself out of it, thinking >What am I doing!!!?< But, he couldn't hepl it. Trying to get his mind off of the subject, he said, "So.... haven't talked to you too much lately. How's it going..(mumbling) other than your brother dying and your sister hating you,"(lol!)
Windpelt looked over to him. "Oh, nothing really....other than Darkeningsky and Willowbreeze you mean? Then yeah...nothing much..." Windpelt shook the awkwardness off, trying to ignore the silence.
Greyfrost wanted badly to tell her how much he loved her. He turned away, his heart felt torn. >What will I do? Why is love so complicated and confusing?<
Greyfrost turned to look at her again, and was comforted by her sweet gaze. "Nothing," he lied, trying to hide the confused worry in his eyes. But, he had a feeling Windpelt could see right through him.
The scent of prey made it's way into Greyfrost's nose. "Stormfrost is taking a while, I'm going to start hunting," he meowed. Greyfrost smelt the air, and cought te scent of rabbit. He crouched and stalked that direction. He tried to focus on catching prey, but was having trouble getting his mind off Stormfrost and Windpelt. When the rabbit came into sight, he sprang after it. But, his timing was off and the rabbit got away. Greyfrost tried to catch other prey, but just couldn't focus. He ran in the direction of the River Oak.
Windpelt cocked her head, wondering why Greyfrost wanted to catch prey already. She sighed, and parted her jaws until the scent of mouse wandered into her scent glands. She instinctively crouched down, and pounced. The mouse heard Windpelt coming, but once it tried to escape, she had already killed it. Windpelt spotted a bird in the corner of her eye, and pounced again, landing squarely on the bird, weighing it down. With one swift bite, the bird had gone limp, and Windpelt had picked up the prey and headed toward the parting in the forest to wait for Stormfrost. I wonder why she's taking so long. She must have caught some prey along the way.
Suddenly Stormfrost charged up, panting. "Hi, Windpelt! Sorry I got here so late. I found a squirrel and I chased it up a tree on the way here, then I caught this really annoying blackbird who kept trying to claw my eye." Stopping to catch a breath, she looked around. "Where's Greyfrost? I saw him running after a rabbit on the way here." Then she tensed, seeing the look in Windpelt's eyes. >He loves her!< she growled inside. Shaking her head, Stormfrost reprimanded herself: >Oh, don't be like that. I thought you wanted him to be happy!< Looking around for the tabby tom, she sat down and let her prey drop at her paws. "Maybe he's at River Oak," she suggested to her friend. "Let's go look for him." (wow stormy and greyfrost are just so in touch that she can tell where he is! lol XD)
(k) "Let's go together," Stormfrost meowed. "I wonder what he's up to," she wondered. "C'mon, let's bury our prey here. It's too heavy to bring all the way there anyway," she told Windpelt, burying the prey herself. "Let's go!" Stormfrost stood up and bounded away.
"Come on!" Fallenkit called to her brother as she dashed through the forest. "Wait up!" Splashkit whined, trying to follow his swift little sister. Fallenkit stopped when she came across a tree stump. "Look at that!" she squeaked and quickly climbed to the top. Splashkit cought up and climbed on top of it too. Fallenkit looked around at the forest, full of excitement. "Lets go this way!" she mewed and lept down from the tree stump. Sh ran tords the beach. Splashkit followed, trying to catch his breath.
"Oh...." Flametail felt a twinge of guilt for promising never to befriend Brambleheart, and looked away. "Starclan, I'm breaking my promise....I'm willing to become friends with Brambleheart." he murmured just out of earshot.
Flametail smiled in amusement and sped after him. He caught up to him soon, and pounced on his back. "Tag, your it!" Flametail ran off and leaped onto a branch of an oak tree, climbing higher and higher.
Brambleheart leaped high after Flametail, chasing him. He'd forgotten about camp and called after him, "Flametail! We'd better hunt, because our clanmates will grow suspicious if we bring no prey back!"
"Oh....ok then." he called back. Flametail spotted a sparrow fluttering, and leaped off the low branch of the tree, killing it in one swift bite. "Got one."
Brambleheart headed off in the opposite direction and quickly scented a vole. He immediately crouched down and slowly started to stalk it. At the right moment, he leaped and killed the vole in one swift bite.
Flametail spotted a rabbit racing towards the other side, and raced after it. After catching up to it and biting it's neck, Flametail walked toward Brambleheart. "Got enough prey?"
Cloverstreak pricked her ears, scenting the breeze for prey and enjoying the lush scent of the forest. Hearing scratching ahead, she crept forward and saw a plump water vole. She stalked towards it and quickly pounced, snapping it's neck with her paw. Turning around, she looked at Stormwater and Songheart. ~Cloverstreak
"Great catch!"Songheart purred.SHe pressed froward into the ferns to catch prey herself.Soon the scent of vole hit her nose,and she pressed against the ground.She crept forward slowly. (Can something dramatic happen?)
*Stormwater paid no attention to them as he stalked a plump mouse at the edge of stream that swelled from all the rain the had had. When he pounced onto it, he slipped and fell into the stream, something(a snake) holding him under and seeming to strangle him.*
"STORMWATER!" Cloverstreak shrieked, racing toward him and diving into the water without a second thought. Paddling strongly against the current, she seached frantically for her mate. Her paw hit something wet and furry. Diving down, she sank her teeth into the scruff of the wet furry thing- a cat! As she pulled the cat up, however, she was confused. Stormwater wasn't this small, this light. She dragged the strange cat out of the water, hissed at Songheart to guard him, and dove back into the water for Stormwater. (ironic, being drowned in his own name...) ~Cloverstreak
(XD Yeah!This is exactly what I was thinking nice job!) Songheart sped to the strange cats side.She inspected it closely.'How long has it been down there?'She thought,then sat by it's side to guard it.Songheart frowned and she heard the vole rustle away.
(Wait,could you actually say that the cat Cloverstreak pulled up was a fully grown tom but it's a tan tom with amber eyes so that there can be a cat to fall in love with Songheart?I'll RP him and can his name be Sandstrike.And this could be his pic http://farm1.static.flickr.com/90/262756974_7d9168e81d_m.jpg
(Oh, I was thinking that I would rp the tom, so he would be Windpelt's mate... um) Diving back into the water, Cloverstreak caught a glimpse of Stormwater's fur. Without hesitating, she dove down to see what was holding him down. To her horror, she saw a huge water snake. She surfaced for air, her heart racing as she wondered what to do. Stormwater's time was running out. (What happens next? He CAN'T die!!!) (And lol! XD Warriorcatlover...)
(Oh....okay.Songheart just lonely.) Songheart noticed Cloverstreak horror."What's happening down there?"When she heard about the snake,she thought quickly.Without saying anything,she dove into the water.Slightly blinking her eyes open,Songheart spotted the snake and Stormwater.She padded over to them,then bit down hard right below the snakes head.This caused all her air to fly out.When the snakes grip loosened,she kicked Stormwater to the surface,hoping Cloverstreak would get him to shore.Then she noticed the snake was still very much alive.'If I let go,it will just strangle me!'She started to panic and feel light headed.
Cloverstreak stood frozen on the bank. Songheart had just saved Stormwater, and he needed to get to land. But Songheart was with the snake, and she was being attacked by it! Leaping into the water again, Cloverstreak swan to Stormwater, and shoved him with all her might towards the shore, knowing he would be able to swim the last bit back. Turning to Songheart, she dove under, and grabbed the snake in her mouth, pulling Songheart up, using the snake as a connection between them. Sh paddled fiercely towards the bank, exhaustion dragging her down like a stone. She thought of her kits, now warriors, and of Stormwater, and, for some reason, the cat she had dragged out earlier. Desperation sent new energy to he freezing limbs, and with a last effort, she dragged the snake-rope and Songheart to shore. With her last bit of strength, she cuffed the snake hard on it's head and killed it. Then she collapsed. *** A gentle prodding woke her. Opening her eyes blearily, she saw the cat she had pulled out of the stream. He looked down at her with worried deep green eyes. "A- Are you okay?" he mewed. To Cloverstreak, his voice sounded like water flowing smoothly over stones. "I... Yes, I'm alright. What about Stormwater?? And Songheart? Are they okay?" she struggled to sit up, looking desperately around. "If you mean the other two cats you pulled out of the stream, yes, they are fine. They went for help, I believe." he blinked serenely at her. "You really should stay down." Sitting back down with a sigh, Cloverstreak mewed wearily, "And they left me here with you, did they?" "I think they forgot about me." he blinked. "Cats seem to do that a lot to me. I don't mind, much." "I see." Cloverstreak murmured. The two cats sat in silence as they waited for Songheart and Stormwater to return. ~Cloverstreak & the tom (I would write more, but I think this is enough for now)
(I guess I'm going for help.) Songheart tore through the forest,still coughing water out of her lungs.Then she skidded to a halt."Wait,I don't know who that cat is.I can't leave Cloverstreak with him!"She turned around ran back."Cloverstreak!Are you okay?"Songheart asked,remembering that Cloverstreak had saved her.She watched the tom stare at her."Who are you?"She asked. (MadiShae or Rose of the Valley,Could one one of you make a cat to be Songhearts mate?PLEASE?)
(Umm... I guess. Unless Madi wants to?) "I'm fine." walking over to Stormwater, she gently licked his ears. "Stormwater? Are you okay?" she whispered. As she bent over her mate, the strange tone got up, and, completely ignoring Songheart's question, went over to Stormwater and began kneading his chest with skilled paws. Clovertreak looked on, transfixed by the streange, strange cat. Who WAS he? ~Cloverstreak
(AWESOME THANKS!!! :D ) Songheart padded to the group and watched the stranger knead Stormwaters chest.'What is he doing?'Songheart pondered.Then she watched water start to leak out of Stormwaters mouth.She stared with wide eyes.'No one did that for me.'She thought,still feeling a little water swishing in her lungs.
(Just wondering... How can she feel water in her lungs?? If she's breathing, she wouldn't have any left in there. Just saying.) (Oh, and so now I have to add TWO toms? Me and my big mouth... Yeesh.) "Th-Thanks!" Cloverstreak squeaked, looking at her mate. "You've saved him! Or something. How did you know what to do??" ~Cloverstreak "I've been around. I pick things up, you know how it is." ~Tom But she didn't.
(It's just a little,and she could feel it swishing around and she still had trouble breathing.) "That's amazing!"Songheart gaped.She coughed up a little more water.
"No, wait... He's MY mate, I'll take him back!" she looked at him, her eyes huge and scared. "Um, you can come with us." she mewed forcefully to the strange cat. "We won't hurt you, just please come." ~Cloverstreak Shrugging, the tom followed the scraggly little party towards camp. ~Tom (I need to name him, because right now, his name is Tom. Heh.)
The air is warming up and the only cool places are in the shade of trees. Prey is well, but some of it tends to hide in the holes. Otherwise, it is sunny and warm!
Silver she-cat with blue eyes and a fiery attitude. Is very loyal and wise, but cats doubt her, being a former kittypet. Mate: Otterwhisker Apprentice: Berrypaw
Pumaclaw-Deputy
Large black tom with amber eyes. Is a great hunter and fighter. A little ambitious.... But will do anything to protect his clan. Is very strict when comes to orders but fun most of the times. Apprentice: Dewpaw
Berrysplash-Medicine Cat
Serious, but laid back black, white, and ginger totoiseshell she-cat Apprentice: Mistywhisker
Mistywhisker-Medicine Cat Apprentice
Timid, funny, long-haired gray tabby she-cat with a white blaze on chest and pool blue eyes. Mentor: Berrysplash
Stormwater-Warrior
Gray tom. Mate: Cloverstreak Apprentice: Nightpaw
Jaysong-Warrior
A gray tabby tom who is strong and not-so-silent. He also is very 'eager to please.' Apprentice: Wavepaw
Poppyfrost-Warrior
Pretty calico she-cat that is very fierce in battle, but likes to joke around a lot.
Willowfeather-Warrior
Brown and white dappled she-cat. She is nice, but stern andd will always support Miststar. Apprentice: Featherpaw
Brookshadow-Warrior
A brown tabby she-cat with green eyes. Stubborn and fierce, but will defend her clan to the death. Is very loyal and will do what she thikns is right. Apprentice: Shinepaw
Fernflame-Warrior
Beautiful ginger she-cat with fern-green eyes. Strong, fearless, kind loyal swift, and caring.
Cloudfire-Warrior
Long-Haired white tom with vivid blue eyes. He looks fierce, but has a big heart. Apprentice: Dapplepaw
Poppystem-Warrior
Cream colored tabby she-cat who loves to be silly and mess with her sister, Mistywhisker
Songheart-Warrior
Very attractive multi-colored she-cat. Loves kits, but can be ferousious.
Dewdrop-Warrior
Pretty brown tabby she-cat with a white blaze on chest and two white paws. She is sweet, charming, and funny.
Hazelberry-Warrior
Light brown tabby she-cat with green eyes. Usually keeps to self, but is very friendly and kind.
Eaglefeather-Warrior
Grayish tan tom with matching eyes. He is a very respsonsive cat when it comes to being asked questions. He doesn't mind sharing his views on things and is usually nice to others and isn't very easily agitated.
Dawnfire-Warrior
Dark tabby she-cat. She is caring, kind, and calm. Doesn't like arguing and fighting, almost completely different from her fiery sister, Brookshadow.
Eaglecry-Warrior
Brown tabby tom with silver blue eyes. He is serious and calm.
Surgingfleet-Warrior
Gray tom with light tabby markings and amber eyes. Cool and collected, he likes to be in charge.
Icefrost-Warrior
Small, pure white she-cat with ice blue eyes. She's swift and kind; willing to defend her clan to the death. Mate: Tigerfang
Rainheart-Warrior
Light brown tabby she-cat with unusual purple eyes. Shy and quiet around most cats, but nice and sweet toward friends. She is aggressive during battle.
Tigerfang-Warrior
Dark gray tabby tom with amber eyes. He is proud, brave, fierce, and a brilliant fighter. Mate: Icefrost
Roawnfoot-Warrior
Arrogant and small, but fierce brown tabby tom with green blue eyes.
Otterwhisker-Warrior
Brown tabby tom who is very jumpy and gets scared easily. Mate: Miststar
Skyfeather-Warrior
Ice white she-cat with black taby stripes and sky blue eyes. She is friendly, kind smart, interesting, and funny.
Lightclaw-Warrior
Small dark ginger she-cat with a white blaze on chest and white front paws. She is very nice, but untrusting. Lightpaw is mart and funny once you get to know her.
Blackfire-Warrior
Black she-cat with red eyes. She's an aggressive cat during battle and likes to keep to himself most of the time. She can be calm at times, but very rarely.
Talonswoop-Warrior
Ginger tabby tom. He is loyal, courageous, and determined to be the best warrior possible. Apprentice: Graypaw
Duskfall-Warrior
Small black tom with strange indigo eyes. He's quiet, but friendly and funny once you get to know him.
Ravenwing-Warrior
Strong, intellegent, repectful, kind, but has an agressive side, and pretty funny black tom with a white chest and chin.
Flametail-Warrior
Ginger tabby tom with amber eyes. Kind toward clanmates, but very fierce in battle. Would rather fight then talk when in a situation. Mate: Leafpool
Leafpool-Warrior
Silver gray she-cat with sky blue eyes. Mate: Flametail Apprentice: Lilypaw
Brightstream-Warrior
Fluffy cream-colored she-cat with bright blue eyes. She would risk anything for the safety of her clanmates, even if it means her own life. Although she acts tough, she also has a tender side and is extremely protective of her clan.
Swiftclaw-Warrior
Brown tabby tom with a white muzzle, blaze on chest, and pale green blue eyes. Apprentice: Sunpaw
Stormfrost-Warrior
Small, pale gray tabby she-cat with amber eyes. Apprentice: Palepaw
Goldenfeather-Warrior
Giger tabby she-cat with pale green eyes. Apprentice: Cougarpaw
Brambleheart-Warrior
Brown tabby tom with white underbelly and paws. He is competitve, curious, and a quick learner. Mate: Fernflower
Jadewhisper-Warrior
Jet black tom with jade green eyes. He is very nice once you get to know him, but he will push himself to the limit in battle. Mate: Silvermuzzle
Honeyfern-Warrior
Pale ginger tabby she-cat. She's warmhearted, gentle, fiercly, and protective of those she loves. Apprentice: Rosepaw
Tide-Warrior
Silver tabby tom with gray eyes that also arrived in CloverClan with his brother, Runningfleet, stating a phrophecy. He is gentle, swift, loyal, and caring, but can sometimes have a short temper.
Runningfleet-Warrior
Brown and white tabby tom with amber eyes. He arrived in CloverClan along with his brother, Tide, with a prophecy. Runningfleet's very fast, yet is always calm.
Cloverstreak-Warrior
Light brown tabby she-cat and bright green eyes. She is sweet, fun, loyal, a dedicated fighter, and is very persistant. Mate: Stormwater
Grayfrost-Warrior
Calm and gentle blue gray tabby tom with icy blue eyes, white blaze on chest, white chin, and white back paw. A bit shy, but he will speak his mind when he wishes to. He can be frightened easily, but he trys not to let it show.
Birchpelt-Warrior
White tom with a few black spots and tail. He is very energetic and is a great climber.
Twilightivy-Warrior
Bright ginger, white, and black calico she-cat with green eyes.
Sparrow-Warrior
Blsck tom with a white blaze on chest and ominous, glowing white eyes. Although blind, he is the most fiercesome of his brothers and sisters. His blindness to him, is more of an advantege. Mate: Rainfall
Windpelt-Warrior
Pale she-cat with gray bengal markings and amber eyes.
Fogtail-Warrior
Ginger tabby tom with white underbelly, paws, and blue eyes. Fogkit is shy and the smallest of his litter. He is not the best fighter but is very fast and nimble he doesn't get mad easily and tries to stay on everyone's good side.
Willowbreeze-Warrior
Pale she-cat with dark gray tabby markings and amazing bright blue eyes.
Twistedfoot-Warrior
Dark gray tabby tom with amber eyes and a twisted foot. Apprentice: Sparkpaw
Leafclaw-Warrior
Light brown tabby and white she-cat with pale green eyes.
Blackstripe-Warrior
Very attractive pale gray tom with black tabby stripes and silver eyes(I'll edit it). Apprentice: Arrowpaw
Silvermuzzle-Warrior
Long-Haired dark silver and black she-cat with white markings on face and sky blue eyes. Mate: Jadewhisper
Cloverstream-Warrior
Fluffy, long-haired calico she-cat with green eyes.
Tumbleweed-Warrior
Dusty colored tom with a gray tabby tail. An easygoing cat who doesn't really like to do things on his own.Mostly likely to hanging around somewhere near others or possibly alone but looking around everywhere to find someone to talk to. Apprentice: Dashpaw
Scorchfoot-Warrior
Black tom with flame colored muzzle and paws.
Bluetail-Warrior
Blue gray she-cat with amber eyes.
Nightshadow-Warrior
Black she-cat with golden amber eyes. Loving, caring, brave, loyal, swift, smart, and she can sometimes be shy.
Rosepaw-Apprentice
White she-kit with tortoiseshell patches. Mentor: Cloverstreak
Dapplepaw-Apprentice
Spunky she-cat with a tortoiseshell and white body and the striped legs. Mentor: Cloudfire
Wavepaw-Apprentice
Pale gray she-cat with blazing blue green eyes. Fiesty and sometimes leaps before she thinks, but always knows how to get back out. Mentor: Jaysong
Lilypaw-Apprentice
Silver she-cat with black tabby markings and green eyes. Kind of quiet, but smart. Mentor: Leafpool
Sunpaw-Apprentice
Kind, funny ginger and white she-cat wih amber eyes. Mentor: Swiftclaw
Cougarpaw-Apprentice
Large, redish brown tabby tom with unusual aqua eyes, each a different shade. Mentor: Goldenfeather
Palepaw-Apprentice
Gray she-cat with blue purple eyes and two white paws. Mentor: Stormfrost
Berrypaw-Apprentice
Gray and white tom. Mentor: Miststar
Dashpaw-Apprentice
Swift, ginger tom with black tabby markings. Mentor: Tumbleweed
Featherpaw-Apprentice
Gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes. Mentor: Willowfeather
Shinepaw-Apprentice
Brown and white tabby she-cat with shining blue eyes. She is swift, fearless, and has her mind made up that she wants to be a warrior because she loves to fight. Mentor: Brookshadow
Nightpaw-Apprentice
Black tom with yellow green eyes. He is an aggressive tom that's very impatient. He get's annoyed a lot, though has a kind and fun heart to those who know him. Mentor: Stormwater
Sparkpaw-Apprentice
Dark, ginger and black tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes. She is very brave and determoned. She can be very sharp-tounged and stubborn, yet kind and understanding at times. She finds her self in trouble often, but always knows how to get back out. She is also a great fighter, and is not afaid to show her claws. Mentor: Twistedfoot
Whitepaw-Apprentice
Small, white tom with blue eyes. He's a great climber, swift, and a great learner. Mentor: Dewdrop
Arrowpaw-Apprentice
Brown and white tabby tom. Mentor: Blackstripe
Dreampaw-Apprentice
Long-Haired white she-cat with blue eyes. Shy, caring, loving, brave, loyal, and smart.
Seasonthunder-Queen
Pale gray she-cat with gray tabby markings and blue eyes. Foster Kits: Tigerkit, Beechkit
Fernflower-Queen
Brown and white tabby she-cat with ginger splotches. Fast, and is always friendly and excited. Mate: Brambleheart Foster Kits: Sharpkit, Duskkit, Silverkit, Dewkit
Blownfeather-Queen
Grayish brown tabby she-cat with pale green eyes. She is very sincere and kind, and is always quick to protect her clanmates. Kits: Dustkit, Mountainkit
Brightstreak-Queen
Light gray and white tabby she-cat with blue eyes. She's adventurous and always happy. Brightstreak's also very loving and usaually can be seen getting out of trouble. Mate: Ravenwing Kits: Cherrykit, Fallenkit, Snowkit, Splashkit
Rainfall-Queen
Light gray she-cat with darker flecks and blue eyes. She is loving and will always do what she think is right. Rainfall's very good at sneaking up on her sister and will probably be a good hunter. Mate: Sparrow Kits: Starkit, Cinderkit
Poppyheart-Queen
Bright brown tabby she-cat. Kits: Sandkit, Shortkit, Skykit, Piperkit
Cherrykit-Kit
Small black she-kit with ginger mixed in and blue eyes. She's not afraid to say what she thinks and can be a handfull to everyone except her littermates, who she loves with all her heart. Mother: Brightstreak
Fallenkit-Kit
Small calico she-kit with blue eyes. Mother: Brightstreak
Snowkit-Kit
White tom with gray tabby markings and gray eyes. Calm, happy, and loves to help. Is eager to help and loves to play around with his littermates. Mother: Brightstreak
Splashkit-Kit
Black and white tom with pale amber eyes. Mother: Brightstreak
Tigerkit-Kit
Formerly of RippleClan, he is skiddish and scared after what happened to his clan and all his littermates died. Foster Mother: Seasonthunder
Dustkit-Kit
Dusty colored tom with blue eyes. He is sweet, though skittish. He loves a good fight. Mother: Blownfeather
Mountainkit-Kit
Pure white tom with gray paws and peircing green eyes. He is fierce, and protective, and can also have a mean streak. Mother: Blownfeather
Beechkit-Kit
Brown and white tabby tom. Fierce, brave, and loyal. Foster Mother: Seasonthunder
Skykit-Kit
Brown bengal tom. Mother: Poppyheart
Piperkit-Kit
Black tom with a white muzzle, chest, paws, and tail tip. Mother: Poppyheart
Shortkit-Kit
Dark brown tabby tom. Mother: Poppyheart
Sandkit-Kit
Fluffy ginger tabby she-kit. Mother: Poppyheart
Starkit-Kit
Gray tabby she-kit with pretty light blue eyes. Silent, sweet, queit, and day dreams alot. She tends to seperate herself from others perfering to daydream and has the wierdest dreams. Mother: Rainfall
Cinderkit-Kit
Blue gray she-kit with blue gray eyes. She's confident, sweet, and playfull. Loves exploring and causing trouble. Mother: Rainfall
Sharpkit-Kit
Dark gray tabby tom with a white blaze on chest, white paws, and amazing blue eyes. He sometimes is harsh, but understanding. Sometimes has a sharp tounge, too. Foster Mother: Fernflower
Duskkit-Kit
Gray tom with dark tabby stripes and pale eyes. Acts quick in a situation, but is also nieve alot. Foster Mother: Fernflower
Silverkit-Kit
Silver and white tabby she-kit with eyes like blazing suns. She thinks fast and is just as devious as the rest of her brothers and sister. Foster Mother: Fernflower
Dewkit-Kit
Dark gray tabby she-kit with blue eyes. The leader among her littermates and usually leads them into trouble. Foster Mother: Fernflower
Elmbranch-Elder
Old cranky brown tom with yellow eyes. Although, he loves kits and apprentices.
Rainfoot-Elder
Pale she-cat that is friendly toward kits and loves to tell stories.
Larkfeather-Elder
Kind and funny gray tabby she-cat.
Wolfstorm-Elder
Strong and swift brown tabby tom who thinks before he leaps. Retired early due to a battle injurey. Mate: Stormbringer
Seamist-Elder
Black she-cat with emerald green eyes. She doesn't trust many cats, so you will have to become her friend to get to know her. Retired early due to a battle injurey.
Stormbringer-Elder
Silver she-cat with blue eyes and a sharp tounge. She will defend her clan in an instant. Retired early to a bad birth. Mate: Wolfstorm
echoleaf and her kits had caught 2 mice and a squirel.brightpaw and rainpaw were about to catch a rabit together.echoleaf watched them with pride.rainpaw pounced and caught the rabit.suddenly echoleaf smelled something."it smells like dog"...then she saw it a big slobering brown beast.it was going to attack her kits!"brightpaw,rainpaw climb a tree quick!"brightpaw climed a tree straight away but rainpaw was to late the dog had already spotted her.echoleaf jumped in frote of rainpaw."climb a tree now all keep it busy!"rainpaw climed the tree next to them.while echoleaf batted at the dog. once rainpaw was in the tree and safe echoleaf fallowed her up the tree but the dog wasn't giving up on prey and pulled her down by her back paw.once she fell on the ground it bit her neck but before it could kill her she bit hard down on his tail and he went whining back to it's tolegs.echoleaf stood blood poring from her neck,both apprentices ruhed to there mothers side."echoleaf you beat it,you beat it!"they cheered suddenly brightpaw noticed that echoleaf was saking."echoleaf are you ok?"
ReplyDeletethen she fell weak and dieing.both of her kits gatherd around her."echoleaf don't leave us!"screeched rainpaw with greaf.then with her last breath echoleaf said"kits i love you more then anything but i must leave you, starclan are calling me,honeyfern my sister will look out for you.."she wisperd.rainpaw and brightpaw let out mews of grief."we love you."they told her together before her eyes turned grey and she stared into nough thing."lets get her back to camp"said brightpaw tearfully.rainpaw stared at her mother."it's my falt shes dead!,will they realy want me back?"she asked her sister tearfully."of coarse they will!"brightpaw anserwd.rainpaw looked at her sister trusting her completly."could you pick her up by the back fur ,i'll pick her up by the scruff.with that they carried her back to camp and laid her in the middle of the clearing.
[see clearing to see what happens.]
~echoleaf,brightpaw,rainpaw
Mallownose limpped threw the forest "Why are we even here Tiger. . .claw?" she chocked out.
ReplyDeleteHe smiled at Mallownose. "Uh. . . we need prey and herbs. Look at you. Trust me. . . I know what I'm doing." He looked around.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Uh huh. Because you just know a whole bunch about medicine stuff right?" Mallownose muttered under her breath.
ReplyDelete"Well, Stormflower WAS my sister," he said.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Whatever" Mallownose growled still limping heavily. "Can we rest for the day?" she shot a look at her injured leg.
ReplyDeleteHe nodded sympethiticly. "Okay, I think I see some cobwebs over there," he said as she layed down.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
Mallownose curled up in a tight ball, letting her hind leg drop. "Oww" she groaned
ReplyDeleteHe pawed at the cobwebs in the branch and hobbled over to Mallownose. Tigerclaw pressed them to her leg. "Any idea what's good for an enfection?" he asked.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"No, Mister Medicine Cat" Mallownose growled "Why did you have to run Willowfeather away? She was just trying to help! Plus she is kin!"
ReplyDelete"We don't need her. We have each other and next time I run into Stormflower I'll make sure to get the herbs you need," he says yawning.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"You don't need her! I need her! I haven't seen Stoneblaze and Flowerseed in moons! Why do I need to travel with you?? I hate you!" Mallownose ranted growling and twitching her hind leg.
ReplyDeleteHe didn't look around to face her. Well, I love you, he wanted to say. "Fine," he growled to her. "You couldn't make it to them anyway. I'M the reason you alive!"
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Your the reason I am wounded! Think of it like this, if I was traveling with Willowfeather or Poppyfrost or Darkfang or Flowerseed would I really be this wounded? Even if I was we could just go to the nearest clan and get help!" Mallownose hissed.
ReplyDelete"We are in a clan's territory! Well, sorry I was trying to hunt prey and find a stream for water."
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Well how come we don't go to a different territory? Mothfang (I think, Poppyfrosts mother) lives with Dustfang across the moor, she starting her own clan!" Mallownose growled
ReplyDelete"She is?" he asked surpried.
ReplyDelete-Mallownose
"Yes! Dustfang is Duststar now, of Mothclan! Maybe I should head their way instead!"
ReplyDelete(Im gonna make a Mothclan, but not for joining, just if Tigerclaw wants to go lol)
He glared at the ground. "Fine, go! If you don't need me then leave!"
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Where will you go?" Mallownose glared at Tigerclaw "Just so I know. . . . ."
ReplyDelete"I don't know," he mumbled. "Somewhere among the clans."
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Look at me Tigerclaw!" Mallownose growled "What are you planning to do?"
ReplyDeleteHe spun around. "I don't know," he says.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
"Yes you do! I can see it in your face! What are you going to do?" Mallownose un-curled from her tight ball, wincing as her leg brushed the forest floor.
ReplyDelete"I alrady told you. I don't know!" he snarled.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
Mallownose shrank back, wincing as she did so. "I know you do!" she hissed trying to back out of the bracken.
ReplyDeleteHe turned his back to her. "Just go," he meowed quietly.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
Mallownose felt heart-broken. But why? She shook the feeling away and gulped loudly "I will" she sunk out of the bush and limped rapidly away from him.
ReplyDeleteAs she left, Tigerclaw did nothing, but a single tear rolled down his cheek.
ReplyDelete-Tigerclaw
When Sparrowkit heard them pass by he nudged Darkeningkit. "Okay, they're gone. Let's go," he said walking out of the bush.
ReplyDelete-Sparowkit
Darkeningkit followed then took a deep breath. Then he smelled something.
ReplyDelete"Do you smell that scent?" Darkeningkit said. "An adder!"
>Darkeningkit<
He cuffed his brother's ear. "Yeah, I heard it way back there. That's why I was going the other way."
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
"Well then there's another one. And the scents strong, too. Like it's right the-" he was cut off from a hiss from behind. He turned around as a snake slithered into thier path, blocking them.
ReplyDelete>Darkeningkit<
"Ack! It HUGE. That is NO adder," he says, backing away.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
Suddenly a shape crashed though the bushes, landing on the snake who was hissing. It was Tawnyfur!
ReplyDelete>Darkeningkit<
"Mama!" he called scenting her.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
Tawnyfur wrestled with the snake. It was strong, and she stuggled to stay away from it's mouth. But she clawed in scatched, ony a few of her blows even left a mark in the scaly skin.
ReplyDelete>Tawnyfur<
"Mom!" he called out again.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
She felt to sharp fangs sink into her side, making part of her go numb, but she kept on fighting, her blows getting weaker and weaker...
ReplyDelete>Tawnyfur<
"No, Mom!" he yowled running towards her.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
Cloudfire burst into the forest, grabbing Sparrowkit's scruff and putting him back "Stay with your brother!" he growled leaping on the snake digging his claws in deep
ReplyDelete~-~Cloudfire~-~
He did as his father told, and stood next to DArkeningkit.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
Darkeningkit closed his eyes, not bearing to watch.
ReplyDelete>Darkeningkit<
The snake hissed in pain and hissed, slithering away as fast as it could.
>Snake<
Tawnyfur crouched there, still feeling numb on her side. They the numbness turned to fire. and it spread all over her body.
"Fire!" she hissed, her eyes wide with pain.
>Tawnyfur<
Cloudfire ran over to his mate pressing his nose into her fur "There is no fire," then he saw the bite in her side and his eyes filled with pain "NO!" he cired "NO NO!"
ReplyDelete~-~Cloudfire~-~
He winced, then rushed to his mother when he heard the snake go away.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
"Yes there is!" She exclaimed, it's everywhere!" she said, slowly closing her eyes. "Everywhere....." she mummered, and then collapsed, limp and lifeless.
ReplyDelete>Tawnyfur<
(THIS WAS THE HARDEST THING I HAD TO WRITE EVER, OK!?!?! )
(At least you'll admit that. :-D)
ReplyDeleteCloudfire felt tears burn down his cheeks. He looked at his kits, he buried his nose in Tawnyfur's pelt "I'll take good care of them, for you, I love you, forever and always," he sobbed He grabbed her scruff "K-kits," he mewed shakily, taking her body back to camp
ReplyDelete~-~Cloudfire~-~
(OMG I'm gonna cry <3=Cloudfire)
(it had to be done, guyz. it did.)
ReplyDeleteDarkeningkit looked shocked.
This is a horrible nightmare? Why won't I wake up!?!?!
he managed to move his paws to follow them.
>Darkeningkit<
"It's all our fault, DArkeningkit! If we hadn't snuck out, that snake wouldn't have ran into us and mom wouldn't have to save us. She would still be alive!"
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
"No!" Darkeningkit wailed. "It can't be real! We'll wake up soon, right?" he said looking at his brother and father.
ReplyDelete>Darkeningkit<
"No we won't!" he cried.
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
Cloudfire looked at his kits "No, Darkeningkit... Tawnyfur is... is," he gulped his eyes brimming with new tears "gone, she will never come back," he cried barely contrillong his emotions wanting to just let it all go, scream to StarClan that they shouldn't have taken her. That they should give her back right now because it was not fair she had kit who needed her he needed her...
ReplyDelete~-~Cloudfire~-~
"It's all my fault them. I'm the one who said we should leave camp!" he said.
ReplyDelete"They should drive me off, if that's what I deserve." he muttered Darkly.
>Darkeningkit<
Cloudfire looked at his son "No! You can't, I need you guys, your my kits, I can't loose her... and you," he cried
ReplyDelete~-~Cloudfire~-~
He curled up in a tight ball and allowed himself to be carried, before whispering to Darkeningkit, "We have to be strong. For dad. Fogkit. Windkit and Willowkit."
ReplyDelete-Sparrowkit
Darkeningkit just blinked sadly as they killed the Cloverclan camp.
ReplyDelete>Darkeningkit<
Cloudfire curled around Sparrowkit and Darkeningkit "You guys should get some sleep," he whispered "It's been an eventful day,"
ReplyDelete~-~Cloudfire~-~
(sorr I meant NEARED, and i thought they weren't at the camp yet.)
ReplyDelete(so sad, y did she need to die?!?! plus, lol u killed the camp)
ReplyDeleteLeafpool padded through the thick brambles of the forest, and suddenly scented Flametail. She saw him hunting a rabbit. He chased it around the clearing, until he reached it and killed it in one swipe.
ReplyDelete"Nice catch!" she commented.
~Leafpool
Flametail looked up, fur on his back starting to bristle (thinks it's Brambleheart), rabbit dangling from his jaws. "Oh hi Leafpool, I didn't see you there. Thanks, but I could have done better then a scrawny rabbit." He looked down at his piece of prey.
ReplyDelete-Flametail
"I think you're the best hunter AND fighter in Cloverclan!!" she smiled. "And don't mind Brambleheart. All he can think about now is Fernstream! And you don't look that bad with that scar, you actually look more handsome..."
ReplyDeleteLeafpool suddenly blurted out without thinking.
~Leafpool
"Thanks for all the compliments, but I don't think I'm even near the best hunter and fighter yet. I agree on the Brambleheart part though. Never thinking that he shouldn't be out playing with Fernstream when he could be hunting for the clan! And....I do?" Flametail felt the tips of his ears go red. "Wait what?! I can't be in love with her! I-I....need to be a warrior. Although....she's not a bad cat." He thought.
ReplyDelete-Flametail
"I need to tell you something, Flametail."
ReplyDeleteLeafpool stammered. "It's time to tell him the truth." she thought
~Leafpool
"Sure Leafpool, what is it?" Flametail sat down, prey at his paws, heart pounding.
ReplyDelete-Flametail
"I-I love you!!!!" she yowled, surprised it came out loudly. "I have admired you ever since I saw you walk out of the apprentices' den!!!"
ReplyDelete~Leafpool
Flametail's eyes widened. "How? I never thought she could like someone with a scar on his eye." he thought. "I've liked you too Leafpool...I've been getting this weird feeling in my heary every time I look at you. I-I really do love you." Flametail calmed down, licking Leafpool's ear.
ReplyDelete-Flametail
(heary? heart!!!)
ReplyDeleteLeafpool blushed. She nuzzled his cheek.
"We should get back to camp." she meowed.
Flametail picked up the rabbit and together, they padded back towards camp, their tails linked together.
~Leafpool
(oops sry. I was typing fast)
ReplyDeleterainfall had caught 2 rabits,a squirel.her sister brightstreak had caught 3 mice and a sparow.thinking they had enough prey and how fast the sun was setting she said:"let's get back to camp the gathering will be soon.with that they set off tawards camp.
ReplyDelete~rainfall
wow its great out here
ReplyDelete-featherkit
com on lets go back in, ive got a bad feeling about this
-dashkit
no its fine lets explore
- featherkit
( comments at beach )
Sparkit walks into the forest, stunned. "Wow," is all she can say. She looks around checking if anyone is following, then pads on in the direction of the beach. Whitekit pads into the forest nurvously, still tracking is mistivous(i think its spell wrong idc) sister.
ReplyDelete~>Sparkkit&Whitekit<~
featherkit quickly stalks him but finds a fat rabbit , ill kill that and take it back,
ReplyDeletequickly jumps and lands on prey and swipes at neck
wow i caught my first prey!
she digs hole and buries it, and follows whitekit
-featherkit
featherkit picks up her prey proudly and walks back to camp
ReplyDelete-featherkit
Ravenshadow stalks fallowing the scent of a sparrow. He sees it, he spings, and kills it. He burys his fresh-kill then goes off to find more. After a bit of hunting, he also has a rabbit and two mice. He carries his mouth full of fresh kill back to camp.
ReplyDelete~>Ravenshadow
brightstreak spots ravenshadow heading back to camp,done with her hunting too,she fallows him back to camp.
ReplyDelete~brightstreak
Greypaw leads his mother Dovecloud into the forest. "Where do you want to walk to?" he asked. "Umm....take me to the River Oak please," she meowed. "Are you sure? You will have to swim," Greypaw meowed. "I know and I know how you can help me," Dovecloud meowed, half her mind wondering, somewhere else. Together they padded to the River Oak.
ReplyDelete~>Dovecloud&Greypaw<~
*Sparrowpaw bumped into Rainfall on his way into camp and the tips of her ears turned red.*
ReplyDeleteS-Sorry.
(He did that, because Rainfall would think it was an accident, cause he's blind, but it wasn't.)
Sparrowpaw
(oh, so he likes her.)
ReplyDelete(Yeah)
ReplyDeleterainfall pads and spots a mouse. she stalks it,jumps,kills it,and turns tawards sparrowpaw."how you doing with your hunting?"she askes him.
ReplyDelete~rainfall
*He undug his mice, sparrow, and thrush.*
ReplyDeleteGood.
Sparrowpaw
rainfall's eyes widen,"you caught all that?!"she said realy impressed.she turned and undug her squirel and two rabits.
ReplyDelete~rainfall
Yeah. You must be pretty fast to catch two rabbits. Wanna go on a walk .. maybe? We caught enough prey.
ReplyDelete*He shuffled his paws.*
Sparrowpaw
rainfall purred,"sure where do you wanna go?"she mewed cheerfully.her spitits rising just thinking about it.why do i feel this way?she thouht. he is just anouther apprentice.right?for some reason she wasen't so sure anymore.every time he looks in my derection my ear tips turn red and
ReplyDeleteand i'm at lost for words,could i be in love? well if this is love then i never want it to go away.she thought.
~rainfall
Um, I don't know, let's just walk. So, sorry to hear about your mom.
ReplyDeleteSparrowpaw
"it's ok,she's been dead for awhile,sorry to hear about yours,she died while you where still a kit.at least mine lived till after i was an apprentice."she said sadly.turning to happier thoughts.she said " you know we'll be having new clanmates soon.brightstreak is going to be having ravenshadow's kits.i hope i'll have kits of my own one day too"she said cheerfully.
ReplyDelete~rainfall
then she saw darkeningpaw,and sparrowpaw went to see what his brother was doing.[see parol page.]
ReplyDelete~rainfall
Yeah. That's great!
ReplyDeleteAww, I bet she already has someone in mind.
*He looked down.*
Sparrowpaw
Dawnfire padded quietly- not loud enough for Sparrowpaw to hear- and purred down at the blind apprentice. "She does love you, you know. I know enough about love to tell that from her. If Starclan destinies you two to be together, then you surely will," she meows, trying to comfort the young apprentice, as she could tell the look on his face was of someone who thought he was denied love.
ReplyDeleteThe light brown she-cat padded quietly through CloverClan territory. She stopped, and turned her head. "Strike! This way!" she called, heading tord the River Oak.
ReplyDelete-A Rouge
(They can make their den in the hollow bottom of the River Oak)
*He tugged at his younger brother's tail, yanking him back.*
ReplyDeleteLily, I don't think we should settle in someone eleses territory. You could get hurt.
*He touched his nose to her ear.*
And I don't want that to happen. At least not while your exspecting my kits.
Strike
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ReplyDeleteLeo tried not to mutter crossly, but looked around, alert.
ReplyDelete>Leo<
"But I was around here the other day, and I found a great place! It's in the middle of the stream, I don't think the clan cats even go there..." Lily replied. "And we need to find some place! It's mostly clan territory everywhere around here, anyway. COme on!" she meowed and padded off, to the River Oak.
ReplyDelete~>Lily
*He exchanged a glance with Leo and grudingly follows his mate.*
ReplyDeleteStrike
Leo rolled his eyes, following behind.
ReplyDelete>Leo<
Chloe ran through the forest, wishing she could be safe at home with her housefolks, but not after what Drake had told her. She found a gap in the tree roots making a kind of den. She squeezed iinside, it was sheltered from the wind. But what was she going to eat? What was she going to drink. She sobbed putting her head down, she thought back to what had made her leave.
ReplyDeleteChloe had been sitting out on front of Her Housefolk's nest. Edgar had come by, her brother looked at her funny "You're getting big..."
Chloe had chuckled "Of course, I'm going to have kittens!"
Edgar eyes had widened and he ran to get the rest of their brothers and sisters. Soon they were all they, Marmalade, Drake and Chris. "What is all this fuss?"
Marmalade looked down "Your kittens, you can't keep them you know that?"
Drake had nodded in agreement "And they'll probably take you to the Cutter after they've found out!"
Chloe's eyes had widened, she didn't want her kits to be taken away from her! She didn't want to e sent to the cutter least of all! "I... I" she muttered, then she had run. She had no idea where... and now she was here, hungry, thirsty and tired, no way to take care of taking care of her kittens... great
no way to take care of herself or her kittens***
ReplyDeletea mouse scuttled around, quickly seasonthunder whispered to her kits think you could catch that?
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dashkit crept up on it and pounced and killed it quickly
-dashkit
good job!
-seasonthunder
wind began to blow and the kits and there mother went back to camp
Chloe sighed padding out, she sniffed trying to smell food, maybe she could catch a mouse... it sure wouldn't be as tastey as the fish flavored food her two-legs gave her, but it would at least be food, and she had to eat, her kittens would be coming any day now and she had to eat to give them milk.
ReplyDeleteShe crouched poucing on a mouse clumsily and barely killing it, with all the noise she made, she must have scared off all the prey in the forest! She padded back to her den, curling in the warmth and begging to eat the mouse
~-~Chloe~-~
Chloe looked at her bulding belly, she sighed the kits would come soon... she winced, soon, very soon...
ReplyDelete~-~Chloe~-~
twilightivy padded in the forest sunlight shining on her fur,she noticed a mouse and quickly crept on her pawsand lunged, later she caught 2 thrushes and 3 voles
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but as she was headed back to camp she heard roaring she looked behind and caughta glance at a big badger, her heart was beating hard, she felt like racing to camp but she stood there frozen in fear
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(please comment :))
dashpaw saw tilightivy and the badger, and he raced to his mentor and told him everything
ReplyDeleteand quickly ran to the leaders den at camp
-dashpaw
Chloe began to pant hard, she knew her kittens were coming right now!! She winced digging her claws into the ground she felt the first kit come
ReplyDelete~~~~~(After the kitting~~~~~
Chloe curled around four kittens, they were all beautiful, she ran through the names her mother and Marmalade had given her as suggestions before she had ran. She purred she would be able to keep all these kits,
~-~Chloe~-~
She looked at the oldest kitten, a brown and black tom "Skylar," she purred, the second a black and white she-cat "Piper," she purred, the third, a silver tabby tom "Zoroark," and a sandy ginger she-cat "Fiona,"
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Here r there pics, and Clan names (if u need them) Madi :) They'll join the Clan soon!
Chloe (Played by me, Clan name- Anything starting with Poppy) http://www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photography/cats/05418.jpg
Skylar (Played by me, Clan Name- Skykit, Skyflare) http://www.junglefirebengals.co.uk/images/showstars/strider.jpg
Piper (Played by Del, Clan Name- Piperkit)
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3544/3469557786_db10db3d5c.jpg
Zoroark (Played by Savortheflavor, Clan Name- Shortkit) http://image.absoluteastronomy.com/images/encyclopediaimages/p/pl/playful_kitten.jpg
Fiona (Played by me, Clan name- Sandkit, Sandthorn) http://www.dailypets.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/selkirkrex1.jpg
:)
Piper opened her eyes for the first time, looking at the sky.
ReplyDelete>Piper<
Chloe smiled "Hello Piper!" she purred licking her kit's head
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Skylar sneezed opening his eyes suddenly
~-~Skylar~-~
"Hi momma!" she said, looking at Skylar.
ReplyDelete>Piper<
Chloe purred "Hi sweetie,"
ReplyDelete~-~Chloe~-~
Skylar looked down "Sorry!" he sneezed again
~-~Skylar~-~
"You ok?" Piper asked Skylar.
ReplyDelete>Piper<
Skylar sneezed again "I don't feel all that good," he admitted
ReplyDelete~-~Skylar~-~
Piper frowned.
ReplyDelete"Not good enough to play?" she asked.
>Piper<
Skylar coughed then sneezed again "I'm fine" he leapt onto Piper
ReplyDelete~-~Skylar~-~
Piper smiled, and flipped over, laughing.
ReplyDelete>Piper<
Skylar sneezed again sniffling
ReplyDelete~-~Skylar~-~
*Miststar walked around, towards where the fire had started when she noticed a loner. She tensed up and hissed at the she-cat until she noticed the four newborn kits.*
ReplyDeleteWho are you? And .. why are you here, with your kits?
Miststar
Piper looked over to Fiona, shaking her.
ReplyDelete"Hey Fiona! Wake up!"
>Piper<
Fiona squealed "What!!"
ReplyDelete~-~Fiona~-~
Chloe's eyes widened "I-i'm sorry! I lived with my twolegs, but then.. I realized if i couldn't live with them if I was there... So I ran here, I'm Chloe, and these are my kits, Skylar, Piper, Fiona and Zoroark,"
~-~Chloe~-~
Piper stopped dead when she saw big grey she-cat, and shrunk back.
ReplyDelete>Piper<
Skylar coughed "What is it Piper?"
ReplyDelete~-~Skylar~-~
Piper pointed to Miststar with her tail.
ReplyDelete>Piper<
Skylar stumbled back coughing "WHo is she?"
ReplyDelete~-~Skylar~-~
*She nodded in understanding, remembering her twolegs.*
ReplyDeleteI understand, but you can't stay out here. A badger was seen earlier. Why don't you come with me? I'm Miststar.
*She then took a closer look at the kittypet. She looked very familiar, and then, she purred.*
Or you may know me as Sparkle, Chloe.
-Miststar
Chloe's eyes widend "Sparkle? You're still alive? Everyone thought you were dead! Oh, It's great to see you again, wherehave you been?"
ReplyDelete~-~Chloe~-~
*She gave her chest fur a couple of embarresed licks.*
ReplyDeleteIt's Miststar, now. I left my housefolk to live in the forest. To live in a clan. CloverClan. Now I'm the leader and I even have kits of my own. I see you do as well.
-Miststar
Chloe smiled "Ya, what is this CloverClan?"
ReplyDelete~-~Chloe~-~
Well, we're a group of cats that live in the forest together. The warriors hunt and fight for the clan, while the apprentices train. There are queens and kits that provide hte youth of the clan and the medicine cats, they heal us and give us wisdom from our warrior ancestors.
ReplyDelete-Miststar
Piper shrugged. "donno"
ReplyDelete>Piper<
"Maybe it would be safer for us there, and with that badger... Miststar could we join?"
ReplyDelete~-~Chloe~-~
"Mom seems to know her," Fiona said
~-~Fiona~-~
Of course! Right this way.
ReplyDelete*She led the Chloe and her kits to camp.*
-Miststar
Chloe smiled widely "Thank-you so much!"
ReplyDelete~-~Chloe~-~
Greyfrost charged into the forest, then stopped. He was breathing hard. He looked back, to see how far behind Stormfrost and Windpelt were.>I have to admit, I'm fast!< he thought. Greyfrost shuffled his paws, he was alone with his thoughts. He realized how he liked both Windpelt and Stormfrost, and they liked him too. >I think I'm in love....with two she-cats...< he thought worried.
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Windpelt sped behind him, panting. "I've never seen you run this fast!" She flicked his ear, looking back to see Stormfrost speeding along. "So, we'll hunt as soon as Stormfrost gets here." Windpelt smiled.
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Greyfrost nodded, looking dreamily into Windpelt's eyes. He shook himself out of it, thinking >What am I doing!!!?< But, he couldn't hepl it. Trying to get his mind off of the subject, he said, "So.... haven't talked to you too much lately. How's it going..(mumbling) other than your brother dying and your sister hating you,"(lol!)
ReplyDelete~>Greyfrost
(heh, weird family)
ReplyDeleteWindpelt looked over to him. "Oh, nothing really....other than Darkeningsky and Willowbreeze you mean? Then yeah...nothing much..." Windpelt shook the awkwardness off, trying to ignore the silence.
-Windpelt
Greyfrost wanted badly to tell her how much he loved her. He turned away, his heart felt torn. >What will I do? Why is love so complicated and confusing?<
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Windpelt saw him turn away. "What's wrong? Is it anything I can help you with?" Windpelt looked at him, eyes round with worry.
ReplyDelete-Windpelt
Greyfrost turned to look at her again, and was comforted by her sweet gaze. "Nothing," he lied, trying to hide the confused worry in his eyes. But, he had a feeling Windpelt could see right through him.
ReplyDelete~>Greyfrost
Windpelt sighed. "If you don't want to tell me then don't. It's fine!" Windpelt smiled, and glanced back to check on Stormfrost.
ReplyDelete-Windpelt
Greyfrost smiled, happy Windpelt didn't make him speak. He wanted too, but was afraid so he didn't.>I should focus on hunting...< he thought.
ReplyDelete(goes to obove)
ReplyDelete~>Greyfrost
The scent of prey made it's way into Greyfrost's nose. "Stormfrost is taking a while, I'm going to start hunting," he meowed. Greyfrost smelt the air, and cought te scent of rabbit. He crouched and stalked that direction. He tried to focus on catching prey, but was having trouble getting his mind off Stormfrost and Windpelt. When the rabbit came into sight, he sprang after it. But, his timing was off and the rabbit got away. Greyfrost tried to catch other prey, but just couldn't focus. He ran in the direction of the River Oak.
ReplyDelete~>Greyfrost
Windpelt cocked her head, wondering why Greyfrost wanted to catch prey already. She sighed, and parted her jaws until the scent of mouse wandered into her scent glands. She instinctively crouched down, and pounced. The mouse heard Windpelt coming, but once it tried to escape, she had already killed it. Windpelt spotted a bird in the corner of her eye, and pounced again, landing squarely on the bird, weighing it down. With one swift bite, the bird had gone limp, and Windpelt had picked up the prey and headed toward the parting in the forest to wait for Stormfrost. I wonder why she's taking so long. She must have caught some prey along the way.
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Suddenly Stormfrost charged up, panting. "Hi, Windpelt! Sorry I got here so late. I found a squirrel and I chased it up a tree on the way here, then I caught this really annoying blackbird who kept trying to claw my eye." Stopping to catch a breath, she looked around. "Where's Greyfrost? I saw him running after a rabbit on the way here." Then she tensed, seeing the look in Windpelt's eyes. >He loves her!< she growled inside. Shaking her head, Stormfrost reprimanded herself: >Oh, don't be like that. I thought you wanted him to be happy!<
ReplyDeleteLooking around for the tabby tom, she sat down and let her prey drop at her paws. "Maybe he's at River Oak," she suggested to her friend. "Let's go look for him."
(wow stormy and greyfrost are just so in touch that she can tell where he is! lol XD)
(Can we act like it's the Beach, not the River Oak????)
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ReplyDelete"Are you sure he's at the River Oak? The Beach is close by too..." Windpelt cocked her head, wondering. "Or do you want us to search separately?"
-Windpelt
(cuz, he's at the Beach!! so thanks!! because after I wrote River Oak I remembered there are rouges there and ya.....so it's the beach)
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ReplyDelete"Let's go together," Stormfrost meowed. "I wonder what he's up to," she wondered. "C'mon, let's bury our prey here. It's too heavy to bring all the way there anyway," she told Windpelt, burying the prey herself. "Let's go!" Stormfrost stood up and bounded away.
*He padded out into the forest aand stopped.*
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Sparkpaw sprang after him. "What are we gunna do now?" she asked, rather loudly. As always.
ReplyDelete~>Sparkpaw
Be quiet!
ReplyDelete*He snapped at her.*
If anyone's hunting, you probably scared their prey off. I'm showing you the territory.
-Twistedfoot
"Oh, sorry Twistedfoot," she said, quieter.
ReplyDelete~>Sparkpaw
Better be.
ReplyDelete*He walked on until they reached a pool that seemed to be filled with light(comment Sunshine Pool next).*
-Twistedfoot
"Come on!" Fallenkit called to her brother as she dashed through the forest. "Wait up!" Splashkit whined, trying to follow his swift little sister. Fallenkit stopped when she came across a tree stump. "Look at that!" she squeaked and quickly climbed to the top. Splashkit cought up and climbed on top of it too. Fallenkit looked around at the forest, full of excitement. "Lets go this way!" she mewed and lept down from the tree stump. Sh ran tords the beach. Splashkit followed, trying to catch his breath.
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Flametail and Brambleheart arrived at a small parting in the forest. "Ok, we're here, now what?"
ReplyDelete-Flametail
"Watch this." Brambleheart arrived at a tiny puddle in the middle of all the foilage. "Stare into the water.." Brambleheart whispered.
ReplyDeleteWhen they did, each cat saw the same vision: the image of themselves, when they were younger, playing around.
~**Brambleheart**~
"Oh...." Flametail felt a twinge of guilt for promising never to befriend Brambleheart, and looked away. "Starclan, I'm breaking my promise....I'm willing to become friends with Brambleheart." he murmured just out of earshot.
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"Tag, your it!" Brambleheart suddenly tapped Flametail with his tail and ran off.
ReplyDelete~**Brambleheart**~
Flametail smiled in amusement and sped after him. He caught up to him soon, and pounced on his back. "Tag, your it!" Flametail ran off and leaped onto a branch of an oak tree, climbing higher and higher.
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Brambleheart leaped high after Flametail, chasing him. He'd forgotten about camp and called after him, "Flametail! We'd better hunt, because our clanmates will grow suspicious if we bring no prey back!"
ReplyDelete~**Brambleheart**~
"Oh....ok then." he called back. Flametail spotted a sparrow fluttering, and leaped off the low branch of the tree, killing it in one swift bite. "Got one."
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Brambleheart headed off in the opposite direction and quickly scented a vole. He immediately crouched down and slowly started to stalk it. At the right moment, he leaped and killed the vole in one swift bite.
ReplyDelete~**Brambleheart**~
Flametail spotted a rabbit racing towards the other side, and raced after it. After catching up to it and biting it's neck, Flametail walked toward Brambleheart. "Got enough prey?"
ReplyDelete-Flametail
Brambleheart appeared from the bushes carrying his vole, and two mice. "Yea, let's go back to camp."
ReplyDelete~**Brambleheart**~
"Yeah....I wonder how long we've been gone..."
ReplyDelete-Flametail
They went to camp. Done...
ReplyDelete~**Banana Berry**~
Splashkit raced back to camp, following the scent of Fallenkit and himself from before.
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Cloverstreak pricked her ears, scenting the breeze for prey and enjoying the lush scent of the forest. Hearing scratching ahead, she crept forward and saw a plump water vole. She stalked towards it and quickly pounced, snapping it's neck with her paw. Turning around, she looked at Stormwater and Songheart.
ReplyDelete~Cloverstreak
"Great catch!"Songheart purred.SHe pressed froward into the ferns to catch prey herself.Soon the scent of vole hit her nose,and she pressed against the ground.She crept forward slowly.
ReplyDelete(Can something dramatic happen?)
(Sure.)
ReplyDelete*Stormwater paid no attention to them as he stalked a plump mouse at the edge of stream that swelled from all the rain the had had. When he pounced onto it, he slipped and fell into the stream, something(a snake) holding him under and seeming to strangle him.*
-Stormwater
"STORMWATER!" Cloverstreak shrieked, racing toward him and diving into the water without a second thought. Paddling strongly against the current, she seached frantically for her mate. Her paw hit something wet and furry. Diving down, she sank her teeth into the scruff of the wet furry thing- a cat! As she pulled the cat up, however, she was confused. Stormwater wasn't this small, this light. She dragged the strange cat out of the water, hissed at Songheart to guard him, and dove back into the water for Stormwater. (ironic, being drowned in his own name...)
ReplyDelete~Cloverstreak
(XD Yeah!This is exactly what I was thinking nice job!)
ReplyDeleteSongheart sped to the strange cats side.She inspected it closely.'How long has it been down there?'She thought,then sat by it's side to guard it.Songheart frowned and she heard the vole rustle away.
(Wait,could you actually say that the cat Cloverstreak pulled up was a fully grown tom but it's a tan tom with amber eyes so that there can be a cat to fall in love with Songheart?I'll RP him and can his name be Sandstrike.And this could be his pic http://farm1.static.flickr.com/90/262756974_7d9168e81d_m.jpg
ReplyDelete(oh dang, my mentor's drowning...)
ReplyDelete(Oh, I was thinking that I would rp the tom, so he would be Windpelt's mate... um)
ReplyDeleteDiving back into the water, Cloverstreak caught a glimpse of Stormwater's fur. Without hesitating, she dove down to see what was holding him down. To her horror, she saw a huge water snake. She surfaced for air, her heart racing as she wondered what to do. Stormwater's time was running out.
(What happens next? He CAN'T die!!!)
(And lol! XD Warriorcatlover...)
(yea, he can't die...my mentor will be gone... :( )
ReplyDelete(Oh, and yea....Windpelt's gonna need a mate....)
(Oh....okay.Songheart just lonely.)
ReplyDeleteSongheart noticed Cloverstreak horror."What's happening down there?"When she heard about the snake,she thought quickly.Without saying anything,she dove into the water.Slightly blinking her eyes open,Songheart spotted the snake and Stormwater.She padded over to them,then bit down hard right below the snakes head.This caused all her air to fly out.When the snakes grip loosened,she kicked Stormwater to the surface,hoping Cloverstreak would get him to shore.Then she noticed the snake was still very much alive.'If I let go,it will just strangle me!'She started to panic and feel light headed.
Cloverstreak stood frozen on the bank. Songheart had just saved Stormwater, and he needed to get to land. But Songheart was with the snake, and she was being attacked by it! Leaping into the water again, Cloverstreak swan to Stormwater, and shoved him with all her might towards the shore, knowing he would be able to swim the last bit back. Turning to Songheart, she dove under, and grabbed the snake in her mouth, pulling Songheart up, using the snake as a connection between them. Sh paddled fiercely towards the bank, exhaustion dragging her down like a stone. She thought of her kits, now warriors, and of Stormwater, and, for some reason, the cat she had dragged out earlier. Desperation sent new energy to he freezing limbs, and with a last effort, she dragged the snake-rope and Songheart to shore. With her last bit of strength, she cuffed the snake hard on it's head and killed it. Then she collapsed.
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A gentle prodding woke her. Opening her eyes blearily, she saw the cat she had pulled out of the stream. He looked down at her with worried deep green eyes. "A- Are you okay?" he mewed. To Cloverstreak, his voice sounded like water flowing smoothly over stones. "I... Yes, I'm alright. What about Stormwater?? And Songheart? Are they okay?" she struggled to sit up, looking desperately around. "If you mean the other two cats you pulled out of the stream, yes, they are fine. They went for help, I believe." he blinked serenely at her. "You really should stay down." Sitting back down with a sigh, Cloverstreak mewed wearily, "And they left me here with you, did they?" "I think they forgot about me." he blinked. "Cats seem to do that a lot to me. I don't mind, much." "I see." Cloverstreak murmured. The two cats sat in silence as they waited for Songheart and Stormwater to return.
~Cloverstreak & the tom
(I would write more, but I think this is enough for now)
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ReplyDelete(oops accidentally posted 3 times!!)
ReplyDelete*He layed down on his side on the riverbank, his chest slowly rising up and down.*
ReplyDelete-Stormwater
(I guess I'm going for help.)
ReplyDeleteSongheart tore through the forest,still coughing water out of her lungs.Then she skidded to a halt."Wait,I don't know who that cat is.I can't leave Cloverstreak with him!"She turned around ran back."Cloverstreak!Are you okay?"Songheart asked,remembering that Cloverstreak had saved her.She watched the tom stare at her."Who are you?"She asked.
(MadiShae or Rose of the Valley,Could one one of you make a cat to be Songhearts mate?PLEASE?)
(Umm... I guess. Unless Madi wants to?)
ReplyDelete"I'm fine." walking over to Stormwater, she gently licked his ears. "Stormwater? Are you okay?" she whispered. As she bent over her mate, the strange tone got up, and, completely ignoring Songheart's question, went over to Stormwater and began kneading his chest with skilled paws. Clovertreak looked on, transfixed by the streange, strange cat. Who WAS he?
~Cloverstreak
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ReplyDelete(AWESOME THANKS!!! :D )
ReplyDeleteSongheart padded to the group and watched the stranger knead Stormwaters chest.'What is he doing?'Songheart pondered.Then she watched water start to leak out of Stormwaters mouth.She stared with wide eyes.'No one did that for me.'She thought,still feeling a little water swishing in her lungs.
grass! shuffle shuffle. what.rustle rustle
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- water
ReplyDelete(Just wondering... How can she feel water in her lungs?? If she's breathing, she wouldn't have any left in there. Just saying.)
ReplyDelete(Oh, and so now I have to add TWO toms? Me and my big mouth... Yeesh.)
"Th-Thanks!" Cloverstreak squeaked, looking at her mate. "You've saved him! Or something. How did you know what to do??"
~Cloverstreak
"I've been around. I pick things up, you know how it is."
~Tom
But she didn't.
(It's just a little,and she could feel it swishing around and she still had trouble breathing.)
ReplyDelete"That's amazing!"Songheart gaped.She coughed up a little more water.
(Oh. Um, okay.)
ReplyDeleteThe tom looked at Songheart cooly and then walked around her toward Cloverstreak. "I just did what I had to do. No biggie."
~Tom
Songheart carefully grabbed Stormwaters neck fur in her mouth."I'll take him back to camp."The she turned around leaving to two alone.
ReplyDeleteHe eventually woke up and dragged himself the rest of the water, coughing up more than water.
ReplyDelete-Stormwater
"No, wait... He's MY mate, I'll take him back!" she looked at him, her eyes huge and scared. "Um, you can come with us." she mewed forcefully to the strange cat. "We won't hurt you, just please come."
ReplyDelete~Cloverstreak
Shrugging, the tom followed the scraggly little party towards camp.
~Tom
(I need to name him, because right now, his name is Tom. Heh.)
(XD What does he look like?)
ReplyDelete"Okay."Songheart passed Stormwater over to Cloverstreak,then headed back to camp.
(Who, Tom?)
ReplyDelete(Yeah.XD)
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