Saturday, July 17, 2010

The Forest

This is the forest. Place to hunt, relax, do stuff.

-Miststar

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  1. echoleaf and her kits had caught 2 mice and a squirel.brightpaw and rainpaw were about to catch a rabit together.echoleaf watched them with pride.rainpaw pounced and caught the rabit.suddenly echoleaf smelled something."it smells like dog"...then she saw it a big slobering brown beast.it was going to attack her kits!"brightpaw,rainpaw climb a tree quick!"brightpaw climed a tree straight away but rainpaw was to late the dog had already spotted her.echoleaf jumped in frote of rainpaw."climb a tree now all keep it busy!"rainpaw climed the tree next to them.while echoleaf batted at the dog. once rainpaw was in the tree and safe echoleaf fallowed her up the tree but the dog wasn't giving up on prey and pulled her down by her back paw.once she fell on the ground it bit her neck but before it could kill her she bit hard down on his tail and he went whining back to it's tolegs.echoleaf stood blood poring from her neck,both apprentices ruhed to there mothers side."echoleaf you beat it,you beat it!"they cheered suddenly brightpaw noticed that echoleaf was saking."echoleaf are you ok?"
    then she fell weak and dieing.both of her kits gatherd around her."echoleaf don't leave us!"screeched rainpaw with greaf.then with her last breath echoleaf said"kits i love you more then anything but i must leave you, starclan are calling me,honeyfern my sister will look out for you.."she wisperd.rainpaw and brightpaw let out mews of grief."we love you."they told her together before her eyes turned grey and she stared into nough thing."lets get her back to camp"said brightpaw tearfully.rainpaw stared at her mother."it's my falt shes dead!,will they realy want me back?"she asked her sister tearfully."of coarse they will!"brightpaw anserwd.rainpaw looked at her sister trusting her completly."could you pick her up by the back fur ,i'll pick her up by the scruff.with that they carried her back to camp and laid her in the middle of the clearing.
    [see clearing to see what happens.]

    ~echoleaf,brightpaw,rainpaw

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  2. Mallownose limpped threw the forest "Why are we even here Tiger. . .claw?" she chocked out.

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  3. He smiled at Mallownose. "Uh. . . we need prey and herbs. Look at you. Trust me. . . I know what I'm doing." He looked around.

    -Tigerclaw

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  4. "Uh huh. Because you just know a whole bunch about medicine stuff right?" Mallownose muttered under her breath.

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  5. "Well, Stormflower WAS my sister," he said.

    -Tigerclaw

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  6. "Whatever" Mallownose growled still limping heavily. "Can we rest for the day?" she shot a look at her injured leg.

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  7. He nodded sympethiticly. "Okay, I think I see some cobwebs over there," he said as she layed down.

    -Tigerclaw

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  8. Mallownose curled up in a tight ball, letting her hind leg drop. "Oww" she groaned

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  9. He pawed at the cobwebs in the branch and hobbled over to Mallownose. Tigerclaw pressed them to her leg. "Any idea what's good for an enfection?" he asked.

    -Tigerclaw

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  10. "No, Mister Medicine Cat" Mallownose growled "Why did you have to run Willowfeather away? She was just trying to help! Plus she is kin!"

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  11. "We don't need her. We have each other and next time I run into Stormflower I'll make sure to get the herbs you need," he says yawning.

    -Tigerclaw

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  12. "You don't need her! I need her! I haven't seen Stoneblaze and Flowerseed in moons! Why do I need to travel with you?? I hate you!" Mallownose ranted growling and twitching her hind leg.

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  13. He didn't look around to face her. Well, I love you, he wanted to say. "Fine," he growled to her. "You couldn't make it to them anyway. I'M the reason you alive!"

    -Tigerclaw

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  14. "Your the reason I am wounded! Think of it like this, if I was traveling with Willowfeather or Poppyfrost or Darkfang or Flowerseed would I really be this wounded? Even if I was we could just go to the nearest clan and get help!" Mallownose hissed.

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  15. "We are in a clan's territory! Well, sorry I was trying to hunt prey and find a stream for water."

    -Tigerclaw

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  16. "Well how come we don't go to a different territory? Mothfang (I think, Poppyfrosts mother) lives with Dustfang across the moor, she starting her own clan!" Mallownose growled

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  17. "She is?" he asked surpried.

    -Mallownose

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  18. "Yes! Dustfang is Duststar now, of Mothclan! Maybe I should head their way instead!"

    (Im gonna make a Mothclan, but not for joining, just if Tigerclaw wants to go lol)

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  19. He glared at the ground. "Fine, go! If you don't need me then leave!"

    -Tigerclaw

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  20. "Where will you go?" Mallownose glared at Tigerclaw "Just so I know. . . . ."

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  21. "I don't know," he mumbled. "Somewhere among the clans."

    -Tigerclaw

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  22. "Look at me Tigerclaw!" Mallownose growled "What are you planning to do?"

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  23. He spun around. "I don't know," he says.

    -Tigerclaw

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  24. "Yes you do! I can see it in your face! What are you going to do?" Mallownose un-curled from her tight ball, wincing as her leg brushed the forest floor.

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  25. "I alrady told you. I don't know!" he snarled.

    -Tigerclaw

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  26. Mallownose shrank back, wincing as she did so. "I know you do!" she hissed trying to back out of the bracken.

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  27. He turned his back to her. "Just go," he meowed quietly.

    -Tigerclaw

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  28. Mallownose felt heart-broken. But why? She shook the feeling away and gulped loudly "I will" she sunk out of the bush and limped rapidly away from him.

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  29. As she left, Tigerclaw did nothing, but a single tear rolled down his cheek.

    -Tigerclaw

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  30. When Sparrowkit heard them pass by he nudged Darkeningkit. "Okay, they're gone. Let's go," he said walking out of the bush.

    -Sparowkit

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  31. Darkeningkit followed then took a deep breath. Then he smelled something.

    "Do you smell that scent?" Darkeningkit said. "An adder!"

    >Darkeningkit<

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  32. He cuffed his brother's ear. "Yeah, I heard it way back there. That's why I was going the other way."

    -Sparrowkit

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  33. "Well then there's another one. And the scents strong, too. Like it's right the-" he was cut off from a hiss from behind. He turned around as a snake slithered into thier path, blocking them.

    >Darkeningkit<

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  34. "Ack! It HUGE. That is NO adder," he says, backing away.

    -Sparrowkit

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  35. Suddenly a shape crashed though the bushes, landing on the snake who was hissing. It was Tawnyfur!

    >Darkeningkit<

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  36. "Mama!" he called scenting her.

    -Sparrowkit

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  37. Tawnyfur wrestled with the snake. It was strong, and she stuggled to stay away from it's mouth. But she clawed in scatched, ony a few of her blows even left a mark in the scaly skin.

    >Tawnyfur<

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  38. "Mom!" he called out again.

    -Sparrowkit

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  39. She felt to sharp fangs sink into her side, making part of her go numb, but she kept on fighting, her blows getting weaker and weaker...

    >Tawnyfur<

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  40. "No, Mom!" he yowled running towards her.

    -Sparrowkit

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  41. Cloudfire burst into the forest, grabbing Sparrowkit's scruff and putting him back "Stay with your brother!" he growled leaping on the snake digging his claws in deep

    ~-~Cloudfire~-~

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  42. He did as his father told, and stood next to DArkeningkit.

    -Sparrowkit

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  43. Darkeningkit closed his eyes, not bearing to watch.

    >Darkeningkit<

    The snake hissed in pain and hissed, slithering away as fast as it could.

    >Snake<

    Tawnyfur crouched there, still feeling numb on her side. They the numbness turned to fire. and it spread all over her body.

    "Fire!" she hissed, her eyes wide with pain.

    >Tawnyfur<

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  44. Cloudfire ran over to his mate pressing his nose into her fur "There is no fire," then he saw the bite in her side and his eyes filled with pain "NO!" he cired "NO NO!"

    ~-~Cloudfire~-~

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  45. He winced, then rushed to his mother when he heard the snake go away.

    -Sparrowkit

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  46. "Yes there is!" She exclaimed, it's everywhere!" she said, slowly closing her eyes. "Everywhere....." she mummered, and then collapsed, limp and lifeless.

    >Tawnyfur<

    (THIS WAS THE HARDEST THING I HAD TO WRITE EVER, OK!?!?! )

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  47. (At least you'll admit that. :-D)

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  48. Cloudfire felt tears burn down his cheeks. He looked at his kits, he buried his nose in Tawnyfur's pelt "I'll take good care of them, for you, I love you, forever and always," he sobbed He grabbed her scruff "K-kits," he mewed shakily, taking her body back to camp

    ~-~Cloudfire~-~

    (OMG I'm gonna cry <3=Cloudfire)

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  49. (it had to be done, guyz. it did.)

    Darkeningkit looked shocked.

    This is a horrible nightmare? Why won't I wake up!?!?!

    he managed to move his paws to follow them.

    >Darkeningkit<

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  50. "It's all our fault, DArkeningkit! If we hadn't snuck out, that snake wouldn't have ran into us and mom wouldn't have to save us. She would still be alive!"

    -Sparrowkit

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  51. "No!" Darkeningkit wailed. "It can't be real! We'll wake up soon, right?" he said looking at his brother and father.

    >Darkeningkit<

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  52. "No we won't!" he cried.

    -Sparrowkit

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  53. Cloudfire looked at his kits "No, Darkeningkit... Tawnyfur is... is," he gulped his eyes brimming with new tears "gone, she will never come back," he cried barely contrillong his emotions wanting to just let it all go, scream to StarClan that they shouldn't have taken her. That they should give her back right now because it was not fair she had kit who needed her he needed her...

    ~-~Cloudfire~-~

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  54. "It's all my fault them. I'm the one who said we should leave camp!" he said.

    "They should drive me off, if that's what I deserve." he muttered Darkly.

    >Darkeningkit<

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  55. Cloudfire looked at his son "No! You can't, I need you guys, your my kits, I can't loose her... and you," he cried

    ~-~Cloudfire~-~

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  56. He curled up in a tight ball and allowed himself to be carried, before whispering to Darkeningkit, "We have to be strong. For dad. Fogkit. Windkit and Willowkit."

    -Sparrowkit

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  57. Darkeningkit just blinked sadly as they killed the Cloverclan camp.

    >Darkeningkit<

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  58. Cloudfire curled around Sparrowkit and Darkeningkit "You guys should get some sleep," he whispered "It's been an eventful day,"

    ~-~Cloudfire~-~

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  59. (sorr I meant NEARED, and i thought they weren't at the camp yet.)

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  60. (so sad, y did she need to die?!?! plus, lol u killed the camp)

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  61. Leafpool padded through the thick brambles of the forest, and suddenly scented Flametail. She saw him hunting a rabbit. He chased it around the clearing, until he reached it and killed it in one swipe.

    "Nice catch!" she commented.


    ~Leafpool

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  62. Flametail looked up, fur on his back starting to bristle (thinks it's Brambleheart), rabbit dangling from his jaws. "Oh hi Leafpool, I didn't see you there. Thanks, but I could have done better then a scrawny rabbit." He looked down at his piece of prey.

    -Flametail

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  63. "I think you're the best hunter AND fighter in Cloverclan!!" she smiled. "And don't mind Brambleheart. All he can think about now is Fernstream! And you don't look that bad with that scar, you actually look more handsome..."
    Leafpool suddenly blurted out without thinking.


    ~Leafpool

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  64. "Thanks for all the compliments, but I don't think I'm even near the best hunter and fighter yet. I agree on the Brambleheart part though. Never thinking that he shouldn't be out playing with Fernstream when he could be hunting for the clan! And....I do?" Flametail felt the tips of his ears go red. "Wait what?! I can't be in love with her! I-I....need to be a warrior. Although....she's not a bad cat." He thought.

    -Flametail

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  65. "I need to tell you something, Flametail."

    Leafpool stammered. "It's time to tell him the truth." she thought


    ~Leafpool

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  66. "Sure Leafpool, what is it?" Flametail sat down, prey at his paws, heart pounding.

    -Flametail

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  67. "I-I love you!!!!" she yowled, surprised it came out loudly. "I have admired you ever since I saw you walk out of the apprentices' den!!!"


    ~Leafpool

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  68. Flametail's eyes widened. "How? I never thought she could like someone with a scar on his eye." he thought. "I've liked you too Leafpool...I've been getting this weird feeling in my heary every time I look at you. I-I really do love you." Flametail calmed down, licking Leafpool's ear.

    -Flametail

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  69. (heary? heart!!!)

    Leafpool blushed. She nuzzled his cheek.

    "We should get back to camp." she meowed.

    Flametail picked up the rabbit and together, they padded back towards camp, their tails linked together.


    ~Leafpool

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  70. rainfall had caught 2 rabits,a squirel.her sister brightstreak had caught 3 mice and a sparow.thinking they had enough prey and how fast the sun was setting she said:"let's get back to camp the gathering will be soon.with that they set off tawards camp.

    ~rainfall

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  71. wow its great out here
    -featherkit

    com on lets go back in, ive got a bad feeling about this
    -dashkit

    no its fine lets explore
    - featherkit

    ( comments at beach )

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  72. Sparkit walks into the forest, stunned. "Wow," is all she can say. She looks around checking if anyone is following, then pads on in the direction of the beach. Whitekit pads into the forest nurvously, still tracking is mistivous(i think its spell wrong idc) sister.

    ~>Sparkkit&Whitekit<~

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  73. featherkit quickly stalks him but finds a fat rabbit , ill kill that and take it back,
    quickly jumps and lands on prey and swipes at neck
    wow i caught my first prey!
    she digs hole and buries it, and follows whitekit
    -featherkit

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  74. featherkit picks up her prey proudly and walks back to camp
    -featherkit

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  75. Ravenshadow stalks fallowing the scent of a sparrow. He sees it, he spings, and kills it. He burys his fresh-kill then goes off to find more. After a bit of hunting, he also has a rabbit and two mice. He carries his mouth full of fresh kill back to camp.

    ~>Ravenshadow

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  76. brightstreak spots ravenshadow heading back to camp,done with her hunting too,she fallows him back to camp.

    ~brightstreak

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  77. Greypaw leads his mother Dovecloud into the forest. "Where do you want to walk to?" he asked. "Umm....take me to the River Oak please," she meowed. "Are you sure? You will have to swim," Greypaw meowed. "I know and I know how you can help me," Dovecloud meowed, half her mind wondering, somewhere else. Together they padded to the River Oak.

    ~>Dovecloud&Greypaw<~

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  78. *Sparrowpaw bumped into Rainfall on his way into camp and the tips of her ears turned red.*

    S-Sorry.

    (He did that, because Rainfall would think it was an accident, cause he's blind, but it wasn't.)

    Sparrowpaw

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  79. rainfall pads and spots a mouse. she stalks it,jumps,kills it,and turns tawards sparrowpaw."how you doing with your hunting?"she askes him.

    ~rainfall

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  80. *He undug his mice, sparrow, and thrush.*

    Good.

    Sparrowpaw

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  81. rainfall's eyes widen,"you caught all that?!"she said realy impressed.she turned and undug her squirel and two rabits.

    ~rainfall

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  82. Yeah. You must be pretty fast to catch two rabbits. Wanna go on a walk .. maybe? We caught enough prey.

    *He shuffled his paws.*

    Sparrowpaw

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  83. rainfall purred,"sure where do you wanna go?"she mewed cheerfully.her spitits rising just thinking about it.why do i feel this way?she thouht. he is just anouther apprentice.right?for some reason she wasen't so sure anymore.every time he looks in my derection my ear tips turn red and
    and i'm at lost for words,could i be in love? well if this is love then i never want it to go away.she thought.

    ~rainfall

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  84. Um, I don't know, let's just walk. So, sorry to hear about your mom.

    Sparrowpaw

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  85. "it's ok,she's been dead for awhile,sorry to hear about yours,she died while you where still a kit.at least mine lived till after i was an apprentice."she said sadly.turning to happier thoughts.she said " you know we'll be having new clanmates soon.brightstreak is going to be having ravenshadow's kits.i hope i'll have kits of my own one day too"she said cheerfully.

    ~rainfall

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  86. then she saw darkeningpaw,and sparrowpaw went to see what his brother was doing.[see parol page.]

    ~rainfall

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  87. Yeah. That's great!

    Aww, I bet she already has someone in mind.

    *He looked down.*

    Sparrowpaw

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  88. Dawnfire padded quietly- not loud enough for Sparrowpaw to hear- and purred down at the blind apprentice. "She does love you, you know. I know enough about love to tell that from her. If Starclan destinies you two to be together, then you surely will," she meows, trying to comfort the young apprentice, as she could tell the look on his face was of someone who thought he was denied love.

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  89. The light brown she-cat padded quietly through CloverClan territory. She stopped, and turned her head. "Strike! This way!" she called, heading tord the River Oak.

    -A Rouge

    (They can make their den in the hollow bottom of the River Oak)

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  90. *He tugged at his younger brother's tail, yanking him back.*

    Lily, I don't think we should settle in someone eleses territory. You could get hurt.

    *He touched his nose to her ear.*

    And I don't want that to happen. At least not while your exspecting my kits.

    Strike

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  92. Leo tried not to mutter crossly, but looked around, alert.

    >Leo<

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  93. "But I was around here the other day, and I found a great place! It's in the middle of the stream, I don't think the clan cats even go there..." Lily replied. "And we need to find some place! It's mostly clan territory everywhere around here, anyway. COme on!" she meowed and padded off, to the River Oak.

    ~>Lily

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  94. *He exchanged a glance with Leo and grudingly follows his mate.*

    Strike

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  95. Leo rolled his eyes, following behind.

    >Leo<

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  96. Chloe ran through the forest, wishing she could be safe at home with her housefolks, but not after what Drake had told her. She found a gap in the tree roots making a kind of den. She squeezed iinside, it was sheltered from the wind. But what was she going to eat? What was she going to drink. She sobbed putting her head down, she thought back to what had made her leave.

    Chloe had been sitting out on front of Her Housefolk's nest. Edgar had come by, her brother looked at her funny "You're getting big..."
    Chloe had chuckled "Of course, I'm going to have kittens!"
    Edgar eyes had widened and he ran to get the rest of their brothers and sisters. Soon they were all they, Marmalade, Drake and Chris. "What is all this fuss?"
    Marmalade looked down "Your kittens, you can't keep them you know that?"
    Drake had nodded in agreement "And they'll probably take you to the Cutter after they've found out!"
    Chloe's eyes had widened, she didn't want her kits to be taken away from her! She didn't want to e sent to the cutter least of all! "I... I" she muttered, then she had run. She had no idea where... and now she was here, hungry, thirsty and tired, no way to take care of taking care of her kittens... great

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  97. no way to take care of herself or her kittens***

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  98. a mouse scuttled around, quickly seasonthunder whispered to her kits think you could catch that?
    -seasonthunder
    dashkit crept up on it and pounced and killed it quickly
    -dashkit
    good job!
    -seasonthunder
    wind began to blow and the kits and there mother went back to camp

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  99. Chloe sighed padding out, she sniffed trying to smell food, maybe she could catch a mouse... it sure wouldn't be as tastey as the fish flavored food her two-legs gave her, but it would at least be food, and she had to eat, her kittens would be coming any day now and she had to eat to give them milk.

    She crouched poucing on a mouse clumsily and barely killing it, with all the noise she made, she must have scared off all the prey in the forest! She padded back to her den, curling in the warmth and begging to eat the mouse

    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  100. Chloe looked at her bulding belly, she sighed the kits would come soon... she winced, soon, very soon...

    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  101. twilightivy padded in the forest sunlight shining on her fur,she noticed a mouse and quickly crept on her pawsand lunged, later she caught 2 thrushes and 3 voles
    -twilightivy

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  102. but as she was headed back to camp she heard roaring she looked behind and caughta glance at a big badger, her heart was beating hard, she felt like racing to camp but she stood there frozen in fear
    -twilightivy
    (please comment :))

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  103. dashpaw saw tilightivy and the badger, and he raced to his mentor and told him everything
    and quickly ran to the leaders den at camp
    -dashpaw

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  104. Chloe began to pant hard, she knew her kittens were coming right now!! She winced digging her claws into the ground she felt the first kit come

    ~~~~~(After the kitting~~~~~

    Chloe curled around four kittens, they were all beautiful, she ran through the names her mother and Marmalade had given her as suggestions before she had ran. She purred she would be able to keep all these kits,

    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  105. She looked at the oldest kitten, a brown and black tom "Skylar," she purred, the second a black and white she-cat "Piper," she purred, the third, a silver tabby tom "Zoroark," and a sandy ginger she-cat "Fiona,"

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Here r there pics, and Clan names (if u need them) Madi :) They'll join the Clan soon!

    Chloe (Played by me, Clan name- Anything starting with Poppy) http://www.warrenphotographic.co.uk/photography/cats/05418.jpg

    Skylar (Played by me, Clan Name- Skykit, Skyflare) http://www.junglefirebengals.co.uk/images/showstars/strider.jpg

    Piper (Played by Del, Clan Name- Piperkit)
    http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3544/3469557786_db10db3d5c.jpg

    Zoroark (Played by Savortheflavor, Clan Name- Shortkit) http://image.absoluteastronomy.com/images/encyclopediaimages/p/pl/playful_kitten.jpg

    Fiona (Played by me, Clan name- Sandkit, Sandthorn) http://www.dailypets.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2007/07/selkirkrex1.jpg

    :)

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  106. Piper opened her eyes for the first time, looking at the sky.

    >Piper<

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  107. Chloe smiled "Hello Piper!" she purred licking her kit's head

    ~-~Chloe~-~

    Skylar sneezed opening his eyes suddenly

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  108. "Hi momma!" she said, looking at Skylar.

    >Piper<

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  109. Chloe purred "Hi sweetie,"

    ~-~Chloe~-~

    Skylar looked down "Sorry!" he sneezed again

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  110. Skylar sneezed again "I don't feel all that good," he admitted

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  111. Piper frowned.

    "Not good enough to play?" she asked.

    >Piper<

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  112. Skylar coughed then sneezed again "I'm fine" he leapt onto Piper

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  113. Piper smiled, and flipped over, laughing.

    >Piper<

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  114. Skylar sneezed again sniffling

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  115. *Miststar walked around, towards where the fire had started when she noticed a loner. She tensed up and hissed at the she-cat until she noticed the four newborn kits.*

    Who are you? And .. why are you here, with your kits?

    Miststar

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  116. Piper looked over to Fiona, shaking her.

    "Hey Fiona! Wake up!"

    >Piper<

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  117. Fiona squealed "What!!"

    ~-~Fiona~-~

    Chloe's eyes widened "I-i'm sorry! I lived with my twolegs, but then.. I realized if i couldn't live with them if I was there... So I ran here, I'm Chloe, and these are my kits, Skylar, Piper, Fiona and Zoroark,"

    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  118. Piper stopped dead when she saw big grey she-cat, and shrunk back.

    >Piper<

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  119. Skylar coughed "What is it Piper?"

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  120. Piper pointed to Miststar with her tail.

    >Piper<

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  121. Skylar stumbled back coughing "WHo is she?"

    ~-~Skylar~-~

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  122. *She nodded in understanding, remembering her twolegs.*

    I understand, but you can't stay out here. A badger was seen earlier. Why don't you come with me? I'm Miststar.

    *She then took a closer look at the kittypet. She looked very familiar, and then, she purred.*

    Or you may know me as Sparkle, Chloe.

    -Miststar

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  123. Chloe's eyes widend "Sparkle? You're still alive? Everyone thought you were dead! Oh, It's great to see you again, wherehave you been?"

    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  124. *She gave her chest fur a couple of embarresed licks.*

    It's Miststar, now. I left my housefolk to live in the forest. To live in a clan. CloverClan. Now I'm the leader and I even have kits of my own. I see you do as well.

    -Miststar

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  125. Chloe smiled "Ya, what is this CloverClan?"

    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  126. Well, we're a group of cats that live in the forest together. The warriors hunt and fight for the clan, while the apprentices train. There are queens and kits that provide hte youth of the clan and the medicine cats, they heal us and give us wisdom from our warrior ancestors.

    -Miststar

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  127. "Maybe it would be safer for us there, and with that badger... Miststar could we join?"

    ~-~Chloe~-~

    "Mom seems to know her," Fiona said

    ~-~Fiona~-~

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  128. Of course! Right this way.

    *She led the Chloe and her kits to camp.*

    -Miststar

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  129. Chloe smiled widely "Thank-you so much!"


    ~-~Chloe~-~

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  130. Greyfrost charged into the forest, then stopped. He was breathing hard. He looked back, to see how far behind Stormfrost and Windpelt were.>I have to admit, I'm fast!< he thought. Greyfrost shuffled his paws, he was alone with his thoughts. He realized how he liked both Windpelt and Stormfrost, and they liked him too. >I think I'm in love....with two she-cats...< he thought worried.

    ~>Greyfrost

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  131. Windpelt sped behind him, panting. "I've never seen you run this fast!" She flicked his ear, looking back to see Stormfrost speeding along. "So, we'll hunt as soon as Stormfrost gets here." Windpelt smiled.

    -Windpelt

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  132. Greyfrost nodded, looking dreamily into Windpelt's eyes. He shook himself out of it, thinking >What am I doing!!!?< But, he couldn't hepl it. Trying to get his mind off of the subject, he said, "So.... haven't talked to you too much lately. How's it going..(mumbling) other than your brother dying and your sister hating you,"(lol!)

    ~>Greyfrost

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  133. (heh, weird family)

    Windpelt looked over to him. "Oh, nothing really....other than Darkeningsky and Willowbreeze you mean? Then yeah...nothing much..." Windpelt shook the awkwardness off, trying to ignore the silence.

    -Windpelt

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  134. Greyfrost wanted badly to tell her how much he loved her. He turned away, his heart felt torn. >What will I do? Why is love so complicated and confusing?<

    ~>Greyfrost

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  135. Windpelt saw him turn away. "What's wrong? Is it anything I can help you with?" Windpelt looked at him, eyes round with worry.


    -Windpelt

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  136. Greyfrost turned to look at her again, and was comforted by her sweet gaze. "Nothing," he lied, trying to hide the confused worry in his eyes. But, he had a feeling Windpelt could see right through him.

    ~>Greyfrost

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  137. Windpelt sighed. "If you don't want to tell me then don't. It's fine!" Windpelt smiled, and glanced back to check on Stormfrost.


    -Windpelt

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  138. Greyfrost smiled, happy Windpelt didn't make him speak. He wanted too, but was afraid so he didn't.>I should focus on hunting...< he thought.

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  139. The scent of prey made it's way into Greyfrost's nose. "Stormfrost is taking a while, I'm going to start hunting," he meowed. Greyfrost smelt the air, and cought te scent of rabbit. He crouched and stalked that direction. He tried to focus on catching prey, but was having trouble getting his mind off Stormfrost and Windpelt. When the rabbit came into sight, he sprang after it. But, his timing was off and the rabbit got away. Greyfrost tried to catch other prey, but just couldn't focus. He ran in the direction of the River Oak.

    ~>Greyfrost

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  140. Windpelt cocked her head, wondering why Greyfrost wanted to catch prey already. She sighed, and parted her jaws until the scent of mouse wandered into her scent glands. She instinctively crouched down, and pounced. The mouse heard Windpelt coming, but once it tried to escape, she had already killed it. Windpelt spotted a bird in the corner of her eye, and pounced again, landing squarely on the bird, weighing it down. With one swift bite, the bird had gone limp, and Windpelt had picked up the prey and headed toward the parting in the forest to wait for Stormfrost. I wonder why she's taking so long. She must have caught some prey along the way.


    -Windpelt

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  141. Suddenly Stormfrost charged up, panting. "Hi, Windpelt! Sorry I got here so late. I found a squirrel and I chased it up a tree on the way here, then I caught this really annoying blackbird who kept trying to claw my eye." Stopping to catch a breath, she looked around. "Where's Greyfrost? I saw him running after a rabbit on the way here." Then she tensed, seeing the look in Windpelt's eyes. >He loves her!< she growled inside. Shaking her head, Stormfrost reprimanded herself: >Oh, don't be like that. I thought you wanted him to be happy!<
    Looking around for the tabby tom, she sat down and let her prey drop at her paws. "Maybe he's at River Oak," she suggested to her friend. "Let's go look for him."
    (wow stormy and greyfrost are just so in touch that she can tell where he is! lol XD)

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  142. (Can we act like it's the Beach, not the River Oak????)

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  143. (I guess)

    "Are you sure he's at the River Oak? The Beach is close by too..." Windpelt cocked her head, wondering. "Or do you want us to search separately?"

    -Windpelt

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  144. (cuz, he's at the Beach!! so thanks!! because after I wrote River Oak I remembered there are rouges there and ya.....so it's the beach)

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  145. (k)
    "Let's go together," Stormfrost meowed. "I wonder what he's up to," she wondered. "C'mon, let's bury our prey here. It's too heavy to bring all the way there anyway," she told Windpelt, burying the prey herself. "Let's go!" Stormfrost stood up and bounded away.

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  146. *He padded out into the forest aand stopped.*

    -Twistedfoot

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  147. Sparkpaw sprang after him. "What are we gunna do now?" she asked, rather loudly. As always.

    ~>Sparkpaw

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  148. Be quiet!

    *He snapped at her.*

    If anyone's hunting, you probably scared their prey off. I'm showing you the territory.

    -Twistedfoot

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  149. "Oh, sorry Twistedfoot," she said, quieter.

    ~>Sparkpaw

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  150. Better be.

    *He walked on until they reached a pool that seemed to be filled with light(comment Sunshine Pool next).*

    -Twistedfoot

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  151. "Come on!" Fallenkit called to her brother as she dashed through the forest. "Wait up!" Splashkit whined, trying to follow his swift little sister. Fallenkit stopped when she came across a tree stump. "Look at that!" she squeaked and quickly climbed to the top. Splashkit cought up and climbed on top of it too. Fallenkit looked around at the forest, full of excitement. "Lets go this way!" she mewed and lept down from the tree stump. Sh ran tords the beach. Splashkit followed, trying to catch his breath.

    ~>Fallenkit&Splashkit<~

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  152. Flametail and Brambleheart arrived at a small parting in the forest. "Ok, we're here, now what?"


    -Flametail

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  153. "Watch this." Brambleheart arrived at a tiny puddle in the middle of all the foilage. "Stare into the water.." Brambleheart whispered.

    When they did, each cat saw the same vision: the image of themselves, when they were younger, playing around.


    ~**Brambleheart**~

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  154. "Oh...." Flametail felt a twinge of guilt for promising never to befriend Brambleheart, and looked away. "Starclan, I'm breaking my promise....I'm willing to become friends with Brambleheart." he murmured just out of earshot.

    -Flametail

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  155. "Tag, your it!" Brambleheart suddenly tapped Flametail with his tail and ran off.


    ~**Brambleheart**~

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  156. Flametail smiled in amusement and sped after him. He caught up to him soon, and pounced on his back. "Tag, your it!" Flametail ran off and leaped onto a branch of an oak tree, climbing higher and higher.

    -Flametail

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  157. Brambleheart leaped high after Flametail, chasing him. He'd forgotten about camp and called after him, "Flametail! We'd better hunt, because our clanmates will grow suspicious if we bring no prey back!"


    ~**Brambleheart**~

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  158. "Oh....ok then." he called back. Flametail spotted a sparrow fluttering, and leaped off the low branch of the tree, killing it in one swift bite. "Got one."


    -Flametail

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  159. Brambleheart headed off in the opposite direction and quickly scented a vole. He immediately crouched down and slowly started to stalk it. At the right moment, he leaped and killed the vole in one swift bite.


    ~**Brambleheart**~

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  160. Flametail spotted a rabbit racing towards the other side, and raced after it. After catching up to it and biting it's neck, Flametail walked toward Brambleheart. "Got enough prey?"


    -Flametail

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  161. Brambleheart appeared from the bushes carrying his vole, and two mice. "Yea, let's go back to camp."


    ~**Brambleheart**~

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  162. "Yeah....I wonder how long we've been gone..."


    -Flametail

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  163. They went to camp. Done...


    ~**Banana Berry**~

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  164. Splashkit raced back to camp, following the scent of Fallenkit and himself from before.

    ~>Splashkit

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  165. Cloverstreak pricked her ears, scenting the breeze for prey and enjoying the lush scent of the forest. Hearing scratching ahead, she crept forward and saw a plump water vole. She stalked towards it and quickly pounced, snapping it's neck with her paw. Turning around, she looked at Stormwater and Songheart.
    ~Cloverstreak

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  166. "Great catch!"Songheart purred.SHe pressed froward into the ferns to catch prey herself.Soon the scent of vole hit her nose,and she pressed against the ground.She crept forward slowly.
    (Can something dramatic happen?)

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  167. (Sure.)

    *Stormwater paid no attention to them as he stalked a plump mouse at the edge of stream that swelled from all the rain the had had. When he pounced onto it, he slipped and fell into the stream, something(a snake) holding him under and seeming to strangle him.*

    -Stormwater

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  168. "STORMWATER!" Cloverstreak shrieked, racing toward him and diving into the water without a second thought. Paddling strongly against the current, she seached frantically for her mate. Her paw hit something wet and furry. Diving down, she sank her teeth into the scruff of the wet furry thing- a cat! As she pulled the cat up, however, she was confused. Stormwater wasn't this small, this light. She dragged the strange cat out of the water, hissed at Songheart to guard him, and dove back into the water for Stormwater. (ironic, being drowned in his own name...)
    ~Cloverstreak

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  169. (XD Yeah!This is exactly what I was thinking nice job!)
    Songheart sped to the strange cats side.She inspected it closely.'How long has it been down there?'She thought,then sat by it's side to guard it.Songheart frowned and she heard the vole rustle away.

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  170. (Wait,could you actually say that the cat Cloverstreak pulled up was a fully grown tom but it's a tan tom with amber eyes so that there can be a cat to fall in love with Songheart?I'll RP him and can his name be Sandstrike.And this could be his pic http://farm1.static.flickr.com/90/262756974_7d9168e81d_m.jpg

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  171. (oh dang, my mentor's drowning...)

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  172. (Oh, I was thinking that I would rp the tom, so he would be Windpelt's mate... um)
    Diving back into the water, Cloverstreak caught a glimpse of Stormwater's fur. Without hesitating, she dove down to see what was holding him down. To her horror, she saw a huge water snake. She surfaced for air, her heart racing as she wondered what to do. Stormwater's time was running out.
    (What happens next? He CAN'T die!!!)
    (And lol! XD Warriorcatlover...)

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  173. (yea, he can't die...my mentor will be gone... :( )

    (Oh, and yea....Windpelt's gonna need a mate....)

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  174. (Oh....okay.Songheart just lonely.)
    Songheart noticed Cloverstreak horror."What's happening down there?"When she heard about the snake,she thought quickly.Without saying anything,she dove into the water.Slightly blinking her eyes open,Songheart spotted the snake and Stormwater.She padded over to them,then bit down hard right below the snakes head.This caused all her air to fly out.When the snakes grip loosened,she kicked Stormwater to the surface,hoping Cloverstreak would get him to shore.Then she noticed the snake was still very much alive.'If I let go,it will just strangle me!'She started to panic and feel light headed.

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  175. Cloverstreak stood frozen on the bank. Songheart had just saved Stormwater, and he needed to get to land. But Songheart was with the snake, and she was being attacked by it! Leaping into the water again, Cloverstreak swan to Stormwater, and shoved him with all her might towards the shore, knowing he would be able to swim the last bit back. Turning to Songheart, she dove under, and grabbed the snake in her mouth, pulling Songheart up, using the snake as a connection between them. Sh paddled fiercely towards the bank, exhaustion dragging her down like a stone. She thought of her kits, now warriors, and of Stormwater, and, for some reason, the cat she had dragged out earlier. Desperation sent new energy to he freezing limbs, and with a last effort, she dragged the snake-rope and Songheart to shore. With her last bit of strength, she cuffed the snake hard on it's head and killed it. Then she collapsed.
    ***
    A gentle prodding woke her. Opening her eyes blearily, she saw the cat she had pulled out of the stream. He looked down at her with worried deep green eyes. "A- Are you okay?" he mewed. To Cloverstreak, his voice sounded like water flowing smoothly over stones. "I... Yes, I'm alright. What about Stormwater?? And Songheart? Are they okay?" she struggled to sit up, looking desperately around. "If you mean the other two cats you pulled out of the stream, yes, they are fine. They went for help, I believe." he blinked serenely at her. "You really should stay down." Sitting back down with a sigh, Cloverstreak mewed wearily, "And they left me here with you, did they?" "I think they forgot about me." he blinked. "Cats seem to do that a lot to me. I don't mind, much." "I see." Cloverstreak murmured. The two cats sat in silence as they waited for Songheart and Stormwater to return.
    ~Cloverstreak & the tom
    (I would write more, but I think this is enough for now)

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  178. (oops accidentally posted 3 times!!)

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  179. *He layed down on his side on the riverbank, his chest slowly rising up and down.*

    -Stormwater

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  180. (I guess I'm going for help.)
    Songheart tore through the forest,still coughing water out of her lungs.Then she skidded to a halt."Wait,I don't know who that cat is.I can't leave Cloverstreak with him!"She turned around ran back."Cloverstreak!Are you okay?"Songheart asked,remembering that Cloverstreak had saved her.She watched the tom stare at her."Who are you?"She asked.
    (MadiShae or Rose of the Valley,Could one one of you make a cat to be Songhearts mate?PLEASE?)

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  181. (Umm... I guess. Unless Madi wants to?)
    "I'm fine." walking over to Stormwater, she gently licked his ears. "Stormwater? Are you okay?" she whispered. As she bent over her mate, the strange tone got up, and, completely ignoring Songheart's question, went over to Stormwater and began kneading his chest with skilled paws. Clovertreak looked on, transfixed by the streange, strange cat. Who WAS he?
    ~Cloverstreak

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  182. (AWESOME THANKS!!! :D )
    Songheart padded to the group and watched the stranger knead Stormwaters chest.'What is he doing?'Songheart pondered.Then she watched water start to leak out of Stormwaters mouth.She stared with wide eyes.'No one did that for me.'She thought,still feeling a little water swishing in her lungs.

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  183. grass! shuffle shuffle. what.rustle rustle
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  184. (Just wondering... How can she feel water in her lungs?? If she's breathing, she wouldn't have any left in there. Just saying.)
    (Oh, and so now I have to add TWO toms? Me and my big mouth... Yeesh.)
    "Th-Thanks!" Cloverstreak squeaked, looking at her mate. "You've saved him! Or something. How did you know what to do??"
    ~Cloverstreak
    "I've been around. I pick things up, you know how it is."
    ~Tom
    But she didn't.

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  185. (It's just a little,and she could feel it swishing around and she still had trouble breathing.)
    "That's amazing!"Songheart gaped.She coughed up a little more water.

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  186. (Oh. Um, okay.)
    The tom looked at Songheart cooly and then walked around her toward Cloverstreak. "I just did what I had to do. No biggie."
    ~Tom

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  187. Songheart carefully grabbed Stormwaters neck fur in her mouth."I'll take him back to camp."The she turned around leaving to two alone.

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  188. He eventually woke up and dragged himself the rest of the water, coughing up more than water.

    -Stormwater

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  189. "No, wait... He's MY mate, I'll take him back!" she looked at him, her eyes huge and scared. "Um, you can come with us." she mewed forcefully to the strange cat. "We won't hurt you, just please come."
    ~Cloverstreak
    Shrugging, the tom followed the scraggly little party towards camp.
    ~Tom
    (I need to name him, because right now, his name is Tom. Heh.)

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  190. (XD What does he look like?)

    "Okay."Songheart passed Stormwater over to Cloverstreak,then headed back to camp.

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