Tuesday, August 3, 2010

Apprentices and a Sad Loss

*She calls the clan together after jumping onto High Rock.*

Sadly, Dovecloud has passed. But Molekit, Wavekit, and Lilykit will become apprentices today. From this moment, until they has earned their warrior names, these apprentices shall be known as Molepaw, Wavepaw, and Lilypaw. Swiftclaw, you shall mentor Molepaw and Wavepaw, your mentor will be Jaysong. Leafpool, you will mentor Lilypaw.

*Mentors and apprentices touch noses. The clan cheers, but also morns for Dovecloud.*

Miststar

6 comments:

  1. Greyfrost is silent as he lays next to is mother's lifeless body. He nods a congratulations to the new apprentices, then continues morning for his mother.

    ~>Greyfrost

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  2. "lilypaw,lilypaw"he said.once the ceremonie was over he paded tawards her."so you've decided to be a warrior?"he asked her.but before she could ansewr,he said,"i'm glad i would miss you too much.i've missed being your denmate."he said shyly.

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  3. (Who is "he"? Schorchpaw? you never said his name once in that.)

    After a night of morning for his mother, Greyfrost woke up and looked at her cold body. He stood up and grabbed her. He carried her out of camp with his brother, Birchpelt, to bury her. Soon, they returned to camp, ready to go on with life.

    ~Greyfrost

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  4. Yeah, why wouldn't I? Well, maybe you can help me find a nest in the apprentices' den?

    Lilypaw

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  5. "scorchpaw,noded."i've already made you and your littermates some nestes."he said leading her to the apprentices den.[before the fire.]

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  6. Swiftclaw grins widely ( i don't care if cats can't grin okay lol) at his new apprentice

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