Saturday, June 12, 2010

Kittypet-A New Joiner?

The siver-gray kittypet with fur that sparkled like fire padded into the camp behind Jaysong and Hazelberry. Dewstar emerged from her den as they entered the camp clearing and jumped onto the High Rock (I didn't really go with the actual results, but thanks for the suggestions) and call the clan together. "CloverClan, this cat is joining as an apprentice. She is an outsider, but she has proven worthy. She will be named Mistpaw from the way her fur sparkles like mist. I will be her mentor."

"But that's a kittypet!" someone spat out.

"Yeah!" others joined in.

Brookshadow (if it's okay if I use your cat) crouched down and lashed her tail. "Your just a soft kittypt and you won't learn the ways of a warrior. You are not clan born and will never earn your ways into the clan!" she says to Mistpaw.

"Don't back down!" Dewstar hisses.

After a moment's hesitation, Mistpaw growls, "I won't." She leaps at Brookshadow and gives two hard blows to her side. Brookshadow twists around and grabs onto the pink collar with her teeth. She yanks and it flies off after pinning Mistpaw down. Mistpaw pummels at Brookshadow's belly and throws her off once she lashed at her ears.

"See," Brookshadow says with a line of blood trickling from the corner of her mouth, "with that stupid kittypet collar, it will always be at disadvantedge to you. It is a mark of your heritedge, coming from those twolegs."

Mistpaw walks over to the pink twoleg collar, turns around, and scuffs up dirt around it. "Not anymore," she growls.

-Dewstar, Mistpaw, Brookshadow

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  1. Stunned, Brookshadow is too shocked to say anything. Then, she dips her head in acknowledgment. "I am truly sorry, Mistpaw. I see that you are a true warrior, who will become a great cat. Friends?" Brookshadow holds out her paw in a gesture of polite humility.
    (yeah, it's fine)

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  2. (Also, Dewstar, are you playing Mistpaw?)

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  3. (Haha It's like Rusty/Firepaw, except Brookshadow forgives her!)

    Lightpaw looked up at Mistpaw. A kittypet?! she thought to herself.
    "How can we be sure she will be a worthy warrior?", Lightpaw called out. "She certainly has skill, but I've seen plenty of kittypets with fighting ability who prefer a warm Twoleg nest to a cold den. And what does a kittypet know of StarClan and the warrior code? You need to be Clanborn, or at least wild-born, to feel in tune with the forest."

    ~Lightpaw (is a doubter)

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  4. (Wait is the kittypet Mistpaw??)

    Jaysong curled his lip but didn't say anything as the fight began.

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  5. (Yes, Mistpaw is the kittypet. I do play Mistpaw. Okay, thanks, Rainfire. Yep, I kinda copied the books.)

    She nodded respectfully to Brookshadow, then went over to Otterpaw and Skypaw who had not said anything.

    -Mistpaw

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  6. Lightpaw studied the kittypet. She looked strong enough, but Lightpaw still wasn't sure that taking a kittypet into the Clan was the best thing to do. She waited for Dewstar to answer her questions (see my post above).

    ~Lightpaw (is a doubter)

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  7. Dewstar looked down at Lightpaw. "She has proven herself and she will learn about the warrior code and StarClan like any other clan born warrior. Infact, Mistypaw will teach her about StarClan for the rest of the day. What she believes doesn't affect her whole clan," she said glancing at someone she knows does not believe in StarClan.

    -Dewstar

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  8. "Uh, hey kittypet!" Otterpaw nudged her heartily scooping her off of her feet.

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  9. She scrambles back onto her feet, meowing, "It's Spa-Mistpaw."

    -Mistpaw

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  10. Berrysplash padded up to the new cats "Greetings..."

    ~Berrysplash

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  11. Um... I think maybe you copied the Warriors books a little too much. I mean, I like the idea and all... but it's weird.

    "Welcome, Mistpaw. Do not be intimidated by everyone. You have much to learn here. I am Cloverstreak, and you will be sharing a den with my apprentice, Skypaw. We will probably have some training sessions together. In the mean time, help yourself to the fresh-kill pile, and try to make more friends than enemies." She blinked kindly at Mistpaw, then turned to go find Skypaw.

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  12. She nodded to Cloverstreak. "See ya later, Otterpaw," she meowed then walked over to Mistypaw, where she would learn all about StarClan.

    -Mistpaw

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  13. Brookshadow looks at Lightpaw and reprimands her: "Hasn't young Mistpaw proven herself worthy already? I mean, look at me." She gestures with an air of amusement at her dusty fur and scratches down her side where Mistpaw had injured her. "You should help and befriend this cat, not be against her. Haven't you heard about the hero Firestar of Thunderclan? He was a kittypet, too."

    (maybe Firestar can be a legend of the elder's stories?)

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  14. Talonpaw runs towards Mistpaw and Mistypaw beside the medicine cat den. "Hi, Mistpaw! You're so lucky, your mentor is Dewstar! I really hope we can train together. You're a really good fighter, I bet you'll be awesome! But not as good as me!" Talonpaw added jokingly. He stops, realizing he was blabbering. Why was he even talking to this cat? But he felt strangely drawn to the pretty silver tabby she-cat.

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  15. (Yeah, totally. CloverClan originates from ThunderClan.)

    She purred at the young tom's excitement. "Yeah, thanks. I am pretty lucky. And we'll see about that," she says narrowing her eyes.

    (Just so you know, she likes a cat.)

    -Mistpaw

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  16. "Yeah, Stormwater is my mentor" Otterpaw said stepping up next to Talonpaw "That huge grey one with amber eyes, maybe we could train sometime" he dipped his head to Mistpaw and Talonpaw, "Well smell ya later!"

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  17. She laughed. Otterpaw was cute when he was funny, she thought. "Yeah, we could."

    -Mistpaw

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  18. Mistypaw watched Mistpaw carefully.

    "Welcome to CloverClan." Mistypaw greeted.

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  19. "Are you ready to learn?" Mistypaw asked.

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  20. She turned her attention to Mistypaw. "Yes."

    -Mistpaw

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  21. "Okay, first, StarClan is where you go when you die when you are part of a Clan. If you do and evil action like killing a Clanmate you go to the Dark Forest, which I'll explain later. You stay there in StarClan, until you become forgotten, and fade away. Any questions about that part?" Mistypaw asked.

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  22. "Yes. Where exactly IS StarClan?" she said walking off with Mistypaw as she explained things about StarClan.

    -Mistpaw

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  23. "Yeah, I guess so.." Lightpaw said thoughtfully. "But wasn't he kinda like a unique kittypet? I mean, there was the great warrior Millie too, but there can't be that many kittypets like that in the world, can there?"

    ~Lightpaw (is STILL a doubter lol)

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  24. "Perhaps not, Lightpaw, but that does not mean Mistpaw will be like the normal kittypet. Who knows, maybe she will be as powerful as Firestar one day!" Brookshadow replied. "Come, I want to show you a hunting technique at the River Oak." Brookshadow leads the way out of the camp, calling over her shoulder, "Have you ever hunted rabbits before?"

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  25. Talonpaw watches Mistpaw talk to Otterpaw, knowing instantly what was sparkling in the silver tabby's eyes. Stupid tom, he scolds himself. Of course she wouldn't like you- start liking another she-cat. Like Lightpaw, or something. Still, he crossly stomps his way to the apprentices den.

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  26. "No, never," Lightpaw called out after her mentor. Then, getting an idea, she said, "Can take Mistpaw with us? I bet she's never hunted rabbits either."

    ~Lightpaw

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  27. Otterpaw rolled his eyes at Mistpaw's question then stepped away to go to the elders den to go see Elmbranch.

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  28. Pleased by her apprentices' acceptance to the new cat in the clan, Brookshadow walked back to where Lightpaw was standing. "Sure," she meowed, padding over to where Mistpaw was standing with Mistypaw, "That is, if Dewstar and Mistypaw says it's okay."

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  29. Lightpaw bounded up to Dewstar. "Dewstar, can we take Mistpaw with us for some training? Brookshadow is going to teach me how to hunt rabbits!"

    ~Lightpaw

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  30. Pumaclaw studied the kittypet and started to talk to Dewstar. "She seems a little edgy with so many cats around her. Will that effect her training?" He asked.
    ~Pumaclaw~

    Hazelberry walked beside Mistpaw. "Remember, you can't go to visit your housefolk in that twoleg nest. I'm sure Dewstar will tell you about the warrior code first."
    ~Hazelberry~

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  31. Songheart nodded to the new apprentice.She didn't really care if she was a kitty-pet.

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  32. Okay, here's all the different replys to you guys.

    Mistpaw gives a cheerful smile back to Songheart.

    She nodded. "That'd be great!" "Yes," Dewstar nodded to Brookshadow and Lightpaw, "that would, but I need to teach Mistpaw some things that she needs to know first."

    Dewstar nodded to her deputy. "No, but that was good pointing that out. I think she'll be fine."

    -Dewstar, Mistpaw

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  33. "Okay," Lightpaw said. "Maybe next time?"

    ~Lightpaw

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  34. She nodds. "Sure," she says and padds off with Dewstar.

    -Mistpaw

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  35. Pumaclaw nodded, but still looked at Mistpaw quizzically.

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  36. "See ya!", Lightpaw called after Mistpaw. She then turned to Brookshadow. "Time to hunt some rabbits!" Her eyes twinkled with mischief.

    ~Lightpaw

    (Now continue posting at River Oak)

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  37. "If that's okay with Brookshadow," Lightpaw responded.

    ~Lightpaw

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